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THE WOMAN WHO WAITED TOO LONG


THE WOMAN WHO WAITED TOO LONG

               Empty womb
        Springs tumble winters
              The clock ticks

            Plum blossoms
         Yearnings of passion
               Wept away

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  1. Date: 1/31/2013 9:40:00 PM

    Victoria, congratulations with your poem in frank's "Something to forget " contest. enjoyed the ending... pd

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 7:27:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Victoria - xxxRalph

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:24:00 PM

    strong images they feel more senryu...Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:59:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win, Victoria. Love, Su

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 9:27:00 PM

    Great job, congrats on win!

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 8:58:00 PM

    Congrats Victoria on your special win xxx

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 8:37:00 AM

    I love these haiku Victoria!Very nice.

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 8:36:00 AM

    22 syllables ............ with all the possible highest respect - a stuffed turkey is an empoty hole compared to this haiku as glorious and delightful filled with feelings and metaphors