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To Be Born Again

The pines angular lines as seen
In a Japanese garden
Caught my eye_drew me in, held my
Attention_time and again

Tall stately unique shape like so
Many people if given
The opportunity to be 
Changed_to be born again  

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  1. Date: 1/9/2013 7:08:00 AM

    Good thoughts in this Sara; Enjoyed The imagery also.."

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:37:00 AM

    I often dream about this vision.

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 12:21:00 PM

    Maybe one day I'll see this vision.

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 11:00:00 AM

    This is a very awesome and wondrous write my friend! I have enjoyed reading this delightful and magnificent poem this afternoon! What a brilliant and marvelous piece! You'll have to tell me again what the name of the verse is again...Poulters?? I would like to write with this form again, it was a good form! Great Work!!