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SHREDDED PROSE

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SHREDDED PROSE

Exquisite
moments
                   float
                    to
and fro
to 
              and
                   fro
as
a
               feather
on
a
         breeze
                this way
and
that
              then
                   settle
as
a
letter
                  upon
                   memory's
welcome
door
                    mat

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  1. Date: 1/22/2013 10:05:00 PM
    Liked the layout Brian, havent checked your list, but do you do shapes as well. Have started thinking out shapes they intrigue me. ..... Seren

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 9:53:00 PM
    this is so cleverly done. What a lovely message, Brian.

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 5:41:00 AM
    This made me smile..then chuckle..then then I heard Mohamad Ali [floats like a butterfly stings like a bee] Thanks so much for stopping by my blog! Light & Love Your input is always welcome

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 8:51:00 PM
    Light and airy poetry, great way to end my evening, thank you Brian, I enjoyed this, xxxx

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:58:00 PM
    Hi Brian, love the format and the words. Such a gentle poem. I wonder at the second to last word... what I wonder is what the word welcome would do... certainly, the words and memories are welcome, yes? ;-) I was only asking as often we have a conitation to the image of door mat... being a door mat... I do so love this and that is why I made the suggestion... I'm only apt to make suggestions on pieces that become a part of me :) Hope you are well... and that you wife is doing well, too. Hugs

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:00:00 PM
    Brian I love the format you typed your poem. The title is great made me curious enough to come and read the words you wrote. The poem is a wonderfully written as well. Warm Smiles, Connie