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Alliteration poem

Date due, destruction
Building being blownup
Father flipping furious
Tramp tries to tamper
Delays dangerously diagnosed
Short supply sandbags
Try tomorrow,Tuesday,  

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  1. loving iii Avatar
    john loving iii
    Date: 1/7/2013 5:02:00 PM
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    Sounds like a disaster area.

    loving iii Avatar john loving iii Date: 1/7/2013 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My aliteration went from A to Z.
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 1/7/2013 7:28:00 AM
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    Interesting Alliteration poem..Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/7/2013 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sara was a trial run really butt it seems ok after all......Seren
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/7/2013 7:22:00 AM
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    Nice one girl xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/7/2013 7:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mandy. ..Seren
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    JH Thomas
    Date: 1/6/2013 11:07:00 PM
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    i like this poem. indeed it is alliteration - JH

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/7/2013 1:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for commenting glad you liked it....Seren
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    harry horsman
    Date: 1/6/2013 7:40:00 PM
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    yes i know a little about alliteration, and yes i like what i read here...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/6/2013 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry, for commenting, so i did it near enough right then. That amazes me... Seren
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    Robert Mayy
    Date: 1/6/2013 6:37:00 PM
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    Just looked it up and it fits the bill, but the notion of urgency carried in every line, nice write

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/6/2013 6:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Robert for taking the time to stop amd comment.
  1. Sivey Avatar
    Russell Sivey
    Date: 1/6/2013 10:27:00 AM
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    I don't know alliteration that well so I can't be of any help except to tell you that I enjoyed reading this great write this afternoon! I thought this poem to be tremendous and it was done very nicely! I think you did this alliteration piece wondrously here with this write, at least that's my opinion, Awesome Work my friend!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/6/2013 6:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for commenting Russell
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    David Williams
    Date: 1/6/2013 8:31:00 AM
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    Seren pretty perfect poem...David yep Mrs. Brown hilarious, love it...
  1. Roberts Avatar
    Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/6/2013 2:08:00 AM
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    Hello you experienced poetry soupers. I know this isn't a good alliteration, so i want you to suggest the ways of correcting it, this way i will learn. Many Thanks. Seren


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