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Paradise

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Paradise

he touches her face
looking into her green  eyes
seeing  fear within
smiles and holding her cold hand
he leads her to Paradise

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  1. Date: 8/25/2013 9:24:00 PM
    I tried a different approach and came upon this jewel. Nice short poem with few words, but a lot of power.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/26/2013 9:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    How did you miss this one?..Seren
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:55:00 AM
    wowe what a crime and all those hits for so few comments that is bad form on those reading , this is superb sweetie xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/6/2013 5:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    makes me wonder Mandy 959 read it and about 4 comments before yours.
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 12:07:00 PM
    Seren now I love this, very romantic indeed...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/16/2013 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks David
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 10:26:00 PM
    hi Seren, outstanding, my kind of Tanka, brilliant. Rollo

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/5/2013 10:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awwww romantic Rollo I knew I could rely on you to comment......Seren
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 8:24:00 PM
    This is definitely an extremely beautiful write, very beautiful my friend! I truly loved reading this incredible and amazing poem this evening! What a powerful and harmonious piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/5/2013 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Russell......Seren
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 8:01:00 PM
    Lovely and romantic Seren, enjoyed your short but sweet poem xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/5/2013 8:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rose, decided to practice some of the forms, starting with a Tanka....Seren