Mommie by Debbie Duncan

The Situation

Date: 1/28/2013 9:37:00 PM

If I were mommies then i'd say; don't let love treat you this way.make demands. Don't be afraid to display.men love love emotionaly displayed. Bring him in line he'll understand. If he loves you he'll abide.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2013 5:17:00 AM

Very emotive and expressive work..This should never happen to a child..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 1/17/2013 5:21:00 PM

Tears flowed, emotions conveyed. I hope this isn't a personal experience. Bless you from the bottom of my hart Deb. Friends Always, Connie

daver austin

Date: 1/16/2013 12:05:00 PM

I sometimes wonder - could this also come from the womb? Good stuff. Thanks for reading my stuff. daver

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/11/2013 7:12:00 AM

The people who plea for this every day are counted in myriads! A tragedy disguised in blessing is seen, because of the writing, here. Wonderful writing!

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 1/8/2013 6:14:00 PM

.................... ‡ Hello Again, My Sweet Beautiful Debbie ˜ I Wanted To Return Unto Your Lovely Beauty, To Say Thank You, For Bringing Joy Unto My Heart, With Your Beauty's Kind Sweet Visit; Magical ˜ Have A Very Wonderful Evening ˜ My Love, Forever, Rachel *

robert johnson

Date: 1/7/2013 12:41:00 PM

Obscurely, the child suffers so. It's asking just to be let go. Mommie, it hurts more each day. Too much that I just can't stay. I love you mommie, I love you true. But I just don't know what I can do. May this just be a poem Debbie. Personally that is. But sadly, this reality lives with young and old alike. May God's grace be with you always. <3 :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2013 3:37:00 PM

this seems so tragic, as if it is a small child that has been kidnapped by a child abuser? It would be awful to have this happen to one of your kids.

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 1/6/2013 8:45:00 AM

.... ‡ 'Have Faith In God.' ˜ As The Spirit Settles And Joy Takes Hold, What Is This Dust To Me ? You Are Very Beautiful, And Your Touching Verse Is But A Drop Atop The Mirrored Sea Of A Waning Dream's, Splintered Shores Unto Nevermore ˜ Hush Little Baby Don't You Cry ˜ Sweet Kisses, Always, Rachel *

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 1/6/2013 8:38:00 AM

‡ I'm Looking At The Man In The Mirror, I'm Asking Him To Change His Ways, No Message Could Ever Be Any Clearer, If You Want Things To Be Better Then Take A Look At Yourself And Make That Change ˜ Hello Sweet Beautiful Precious Debbie, Was Just Listening Unto Michael's Song A Few Ago And Felt Like Passing It On And Yet We All Know That Most Things Are Much Easier Spoken Then Done ? The Apostle Paul Would Be A Great Example Unto, 'This Truth:' As Peter Pointed And The Fig Tree Had Withered.... ˜

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2013 4:47:00 AM

Feeling the child grief and fear ..... very touching written Debbie. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Susan Palli

Date: 1/6/2013 2:58:00 AM

Harsh reality for some poor children! Could feel the distress! Great job

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/6/2013 1:24:00 AM

Amazing, touching work. Thanks for sharing Always, Laura

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