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A Part Of Life


                                          The ocean is dark
                               The waves are white on the peaks
                                   Where will my journey go
                                         Into the unknown
                                          Out of nowhere
                                        Only fate will know
                                The storm is tearing my clothes
                               I'm wet and cold way into my soul
                             No one can see my tears on my cheeks
                           I can only see the ocean, dark and no end






05.01.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 6/6/2013 1:30:00 PM

    good thing i got hold of this piece... this is deep and reflective.. splendid write, anne..:) huggs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/6/2013 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Nice of you visited my poem today - very pleased for your comments, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/6/2013 8:14:00 AM

    I so much cherish your poem title a part of life.keep it up and you will impact many lives.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/6/2013 10:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Nice of you visited my poem today - very pleased for your comments, Olivia.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/26/2013 3:45:00 PM

    Existential and thoughtful.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/27/2013 1:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Nice of you visited my poem today - very pleased for your comments, Allan.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 5:31:00 AM

    amazing read , thankyou so much for sharing extremely well written

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/22/2013 5:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Tamara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:44:00 AM

    this poem is great, I want more damn it! write a part about fighting back or something. I fear you don't have enough time to write or something. lots of care in your direction, karl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/22/2013 5:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Karl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:22:00 AM

    dearest sweet Anne...this is amazing... i really love it ...thank you for sharing you nice your lovely work.... have a wonderful weekend...<3<3<3 luv and hugs... far off :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 12:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sukmawati. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 8:26:00 PM

    In case i didn't see this one before, I am reading it now and I really love this one. Great imagery!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 3:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Andrea. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:09:00 AM

    Fabulous poem - very moving words. I am glad I visited it. Thanks for your kind appreciation of my poem Welcome 2013, Anne. Hope is always better than despair. I am a great optimist. I am sorry for my delayed response to your comments. I was busy attending a Two Day International Conference of Writers & Intellectuals organized by Pakistan Academy of Letters in Islamabad. I flew back to Karachi only last night. God bless you for your sweet thoughts. Love. -Mohammad

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/12/2013 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's NEVER too late, Mohammad. - Always welcome. - Thanks for your comments and your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 10:33:00 AM

    a little late seeing this wonder Anne Lise..enjoyed...,

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/12/2013 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's NEVER too late,Harry. - Thanks for your comments and your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 11:37:00 PM

    a nice poem, thanks for your ki8nd comments and support here on soup. have al ovley day

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/12/2013 5:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Diane. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 12:29:00 PM

    When life is down we feel those dark days but we need to reach for the light and look forward to bright days ahead. Beautiful poem and well said. Have to go and shovel snow as we got 6 inches last night. Look forward to spring as we have had a lot of snow this year. Kids are all moved down here so now trying to get things organized. love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/11/2013 12:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The same here ........ sunny and warm days... Thank you for shining on my little poem, Phyllis.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 3:58:00 AM

    Your poem is extremely beautiful though sad my dear Anne-Lise. This is also what I exactly feel and see sometimes. Thank you so much for sharing. love and hugs, Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/11/2013 7:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, a part of life Leonra. - Thank you for visit and comments. - Love// oxox Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 12:39:00 PM

    You truly need that rain dance... I'll send my Trolls over to help... They love to dance...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/10/2013 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes please, I need a 10-12 trolls,Carol.....lol. -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/9/2013 9:50:00 AM

    Dear Friend Anne Lise your poem is beautifully sad..I can feel it..Excellent write my dear..thanks for sharing and thanks for stopping by. Hugs/Love, Maria :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/9/2013 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for shining on my little poem, Maria.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:21:00 AM

    So sad and beautiful!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/9/2013 1:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Vesna. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:03:00 PM

    I like reading a sad and contemplative poem every once in a while. The sea never seem to grow old. Millions have been drawn to its wildness and deadly beauty.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/9/2013 1:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Isaiah. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 1:42:00 PM

    a lovley poem, thanks for your kind words, I have not sen Jayden yet they live to fara way from me but his photos are adorable he is so cute. take care God bless you dear.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/9/2013 1:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So sad.....no hug and kiss from grandma.- Thanks for your comments and your visit, Diane. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 3:56:00 AM

    I love the poem. And I can relate.Good luck.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/8/2013 4:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit,Maria Cecilia. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 10:28:00 PM

    During storms like these you want to keep the love of your life close to your heart. It's best not to walk in the dark alone.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/8/2013 1:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    True, Jon. - Thanks for your comments and your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 12:36:00 AM

    Anne, beautiful poem but sad emotion, hopefully you are okay there, still I adore every piece of work you have done :) - hug, yanny

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/7/2013 6:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) - sweet Janny,thanks for your comments and your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:20:00 PM

    Very emotive and expressive work that you have penned..Yes, that Hawk was flying free..It was in the city though and not close to my home this time..Sara

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/7/2013 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit,Sara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 3:03:00 PM

    it's rare to read a sad poem from you. if this reflects your feelings today then i hope you'll feel better tomorrow. you've expressed yourself very well here, though...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/7/2013 6:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    All days are not "pink" ..... some are also "gray". Thanks for your kind words and your pleasant visit,Ilene. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 10:31:00 AM

    Nice one Anne Lise xx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2013 12:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:49:00 AM

    This is like a stream of sadness makes me want to comfort you, hope all is well Anne Lise, wishing you a cloudless day, and a sunny life ahead, xxx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2013 7:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    After the storm ..... comes the sun..... Thanks for your comments and your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:28:00 AM

    Either calm or turbulent the ocean has got the same depth. In the same way life, either we are happy or sad it remains the same. Tomorrow you will find a serene shore where You will gather strength and return to teach us a lesson or two. Lovely poem, wonderful and powerful image. Thank you!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2013 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments and your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:07:00 AM

    Anne Lise, I've know many of these kinds of dark moments as I often struggle with depression. You have caught the hopelessness well with your choice of words. Beautiful in its sadness. I know brighter days are coming! Thanks for your constant support and care! Love!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2013 6:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    All days are not "pink" ..... some are also "gray". Thanks for your kind words and your pleasant visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 5:01:00 AM

    Hi Anne Lise quite dark for you but i like it, all the best Owen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2013 5:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My "dark - unknown, mysterious" side, Owen ......... lol. - Thanks for your kind words and your pleasant visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 11:55:00 PM

    Profound write, my Anne Lise..I I do not know what inspired this but I do know one thing, it may be dark and the horizon far away, but hope is alive...tomorrow will come! Much love, xx Annalise

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2013 4:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I write mostly "happy" poems. - This is perhaps a bit "gray" - Thanks for your kind words and your pleasant visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 10:32:00 PM

    Anne lise; The year has just started and your journey will go where ever you want to go. Ask Jesus to guide your steps. God bless you. Lucilla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2013 4:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I write mostly "happy" poems. - This is perhaps a bit "gray" - Thanks for your kind words and your pleasant visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 6:39:00 PM

    This is reminiscent of many of my sailing experiences...Norway and Alaska are much alike, I think! Visceral! Well done!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2013 4:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I write mostly "happy" poems. - This is perhaps a bit "gray" - Thanks for your kind words and your pleasant visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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