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To the Egotistical Fool

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Below is the poem entitled To the Egotistical Fool which was written by poet Janet Vick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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To the Egotistical Fool

If I told it today,
In this moment, right now,
Would you believe me?
Not just please me,
But believe me?

If I opened my chest
And exposed my heart,
Would you not hold me?
Not bring me comfort?
Not shed a tear?

My God! Can you even cry?

Supposing I loved you,
And gave my all
With no returns,
Would you then be glad?
To hold my life
Within your reach?
To drag me down,
To wipe your feet?

Thank God! I haven’t loved you!

And if I saved you
By telling a lie,
Supporting your wrong.
Would you bend a little?
Stoop before your lie
And ask for understanding?

And if I cried for you,
Hurting inside,
Would you see me?
Acknowledge my pride,
As woman, not child?

Would you even see me?

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  1. Date: 7/14/2012 8:30:00 AM
    lovely poem and congrats on feature....Patrick

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 7:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Janet. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 12:40:00 AM
    God do i understand this. Love is a spiders web for massacar

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 4:47:00 PM
    janet, congratulations with your featured poem of the week.. hope you are enjoying yours~Always ;-) PD

  1. Date: 1/5/2012 9:11:00 AM
    Janet, Really heartfelt. We always write the best when emotions are strong. They obviously were----and you did. Craig

    Vick Avatar Janet Vick
    Date: 6/2/2012 12:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sorry to be so long in resonding. Thank you. Janet