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daybreak by design

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daybreak by design

an eager morning sun is rising
though the moon still hangs pale over the water
and all things trivial cease to matter
when earth and sky are compromising 

I'll find dawn's beauty by design
and find, as well, joy overcome
my heart, my soul, while watching from
the window of day-night, entwined





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  1. Date: 1/5/2013 11:28:00 PM
    Exquisite writing as always! Love the last two lines in the second verse...sounds like a song of praise, Carrie! This goes to my Favs. List! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 11:01:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery here Carrie!Please check the theme of her contest.

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 11:23:00 PM
    Sweet one...good to see you back, hope all is well. BG