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The Untitled Show - Zanila Rhyme

Ironic lost in mimes parody
The world stumbling upside down 
Stand aside, cast from the audience
Be witness of pranked pathetic clown 

Ironic fill the taste, yet swallow
Your world brings life bitter sweet
Cast from the audience, stand aside
Intoxicate like ripe berries, squeezed 

Ironic in what comes between us
We speak  like no yesterday
Stand aside, cast from the audience
Seek for sense which left the other day

Ironic to end this poetry
Muse sets spot in dark chamber
Cast from the audience, stand aside
Red curtain fallen, show is over

January 4, 2013
ZaniLa Rhyme - an exiting new contest for the holidays... Free Poetry Contest
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  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:10:00 AM

    Hey Yanny, this is a deep poem. I like the use of this form and might try it myself too. Cheers!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/8/2013 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Let me know if you finish it one, I will gladly and eagerly to read yours :D cheers mike :D
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 7:40:00 AM

    Great write here. Loved reading it. Good luck for the contest. :-)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/7/2013 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Menhaz, your comment always uplifting :)
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 5:26:00 AM

    ‡ LOL, Your Precious Beauty Makes Me Smile, Sweet Beautiful Yanny ˜ You Are So Crazy In Such A Beautiful Way ˜ Crazy, Not As In Out Of Your Mind But In A Wonderfully Wild Way ˜ This Is Another Of Your Magnificent Treasures Twisting Yet Powerful In Profounds Poe's; I Love It Very Much And, 'Thank You,' For Your Unique Beauty's Kind As Joyful Visit ˜ Keep Putting Out The Artistic Hits ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/7/2013 4:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rachel, your comment always uplifting always yearned your comment which always surprised me and encourage me more :D
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 1:04:00 AM

    I feel intoxicated by your words, you have a way of drawing the reader into your strange yet magical world. Good luck with the contest Yanny. Hugs Rick Thanks for letting me dedicate my poem to you. I will let you know when the book is out.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/6/2013 11:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Looking forward for your book Richard :D, and thank you for the poem which you dedicated to me, it's being an honor for me :) - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 7:41:00 AM

    Love this Yanny love it is well worth the five re-reads I have given it already and it's due some more. xx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/5/2013 7:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Really you read it for 5 times? Wow Mandy if you did, I love you so much! :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 1/4/2013 6:53:00 PM

    Nice to read you this evening. Light & Love

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/4/2013 6:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Debbie, it's a pleasure to have you here as well :D