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Emotional Imbalance

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Emotional Imbalance

My knees get weak-

As you whisper;

Sweet nothings in my ear.

 

I start to shiver

At the words delivered,

Our fate becoming clear.

 

You caress my skin, 

Leaving trails of kisses;

Every place you touch.

 

My breath deepens-

As your mouth meets mine.

The pleasure is getting to be too much.

 

Our passion is apparent.

Our kisses become rhythm.

Our love becomes a song.

 

I could never really fathom,

How these feelings could be;

So wrong.

 

Now I sit and think,

Of how it had to end.

Our closeness is slowly dying.

 

If I said that I could forget about you-

this feeling of being safe;

I know that I would be lying.

 

Every time I see you,

I want to press your body to mine;

I want to hold you tight.

 

I love you-

Even though I know that;

You can't be- 'Mr. Right'.

 

So the struggle continues;

I'll always love you-

Until the end. 

 

It kills me to know...

 that you can't think of me;

as nothing but a friend.

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  1. Date: 1/26/2013 11:15:00 PM
    Congratulations for a very creative and lovely Valentines Poem and awesome win my dear Alyssa! Thanks for sharing it, too! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:10:00 PM
    Unrequited love is one of life's greatest sorrows. Beautifully written and well deserved win! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 4:50:00 PM
    Alyssa... congratulations in Suzette's sweet sweet " VALENTINE" contest. Always & forever * LINDA

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 2:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on a fine win, alyssa! Annalise

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:44:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win in this contest, it wasn't an easy challenge! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 8:48:00 AM
    Very powerful stuff unrequited love. Well done, one of my personal favorites for the contest.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 5:35:00 AM
    Congratulations on your third place win with this VALENTINE, Alyssa. It is a very bitter pill to swollow when the other person sees us mearly as a friend when it had meant so much more to us. Love, Su

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 11:38:00 AM
    i really love this poem. you work is amazing. the emotion you put into your work is just amazing. Lots of love, October.