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Let Me Come Over

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Let Me Come Over

Oh, baby, let me come over 
I could show you  a world
We could both fade into
Show you things like nobody else could

We could roll the dice and play all day
Fly past the angels and ride the rainbows

Come walk with me through the raindrops 
Let the sparks fly where they may 
As we walk through the sunsets together  
It's all I wanna do with you 

Yes I think we could try 
Learn to fly ~ come be with me 
Because I really need you now
I wanna hold your hand 

I wanna make you feel wanted 
Wrap me up in your love 
We could fly so high, where 
Angels touch the sky 

I just want to feel wanted 
Let me be the one you run to
I feel you on the edge of my fingers 
Tell me, are you really there

Should I know better then 
to call you out like I do 
I don't mean no disrespect now 
I just want to keep coming around 


5am Jan. 4 / 2013 Friday 
I was bored, so I wrote

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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 2:41:00 PM
    I agree with Andrea. This is a Gem of a poem. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/23/2013 3:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Luccilla ;}
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 8:18:00 PM
    debbie, I don't know how this gem ever got by me. But it was right here all this time waiting to be read. If this is what you do when you are bored, you gotta get bored more often!!!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/17/2013 12:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 2/13/2013 3:36:00 PM
    To pass the boring time, it's a nice style to come over, my friend. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/15/2013 2:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you bl ;}
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 1:09:00 PM
    Loved reading this one! If only my boredom caused such inspiration :) great write!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/2/2013 2:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Bethany ;}
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 11:34:00 AM
    Boredom sure does good things for you, my lady! What a great write you have penned here, very emotional

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/27/2013 11:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne ;}
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 4:33:00 AM
    Wonderful poem Debbie. Love Elizabeth

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/27/2013 11:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Liz ;}
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 10:35:00 PM
    This is what happens when you get bore. You get inspired. Good work.Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/21/2013 11:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lucilla ;}
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 7:56:00 PM
    What a beautiful Poem you have sketched Debbie. How lovely is the flight touching the sky and feeling the rainbow. All sad things are always beautiful and thing one too. Thanks for your wonderful comments on my Song/Poem. Love and best wishes..Ravindra...

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/14/2013 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ;}
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:22:00 PM
    You mean you were "bored". Good fancifully descriptive write.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/9/2013 10:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Robert ;}
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 4:30:00 PM
    ah well we have these secret needs, where love n passion intercedes, and heat n steam decries our deeds, just lovers in our fashion.....

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 2:04:00 PM
    poor man he misses cuddles, has she shut the door on you, life has lack of bubbles, when a shiela says we are through... Happy new year....xox

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 1:00:00 PM
    You'll never imagine how much this poem touched me. It finished a statement that was said to me.

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 12:43:00 PM
    And from the heart we will take note. :)

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 9:11:00 AM
    An inspirational write from you Debbie!Enjoyed the read.Thanks for visiting my poem page.

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 6:55:00 PM
    Great write Debbie, I have felt this way for many years about someone..

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 6:12:00 PM
    Fantastic write Debbie, love the emotions of this divine piece of boredom lol, from top to bottom thanks for sharing it... Love always Carma xx

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 9:55:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your work that came out of boredom..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 11:16:00 AM
    This is both a little sad and beautiful at the same time, Debbie. - But, I like it, well written!! xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/4/2013 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne ;}
  1. Date: 1/4/2013 8:59:00 AM
    This is the kind of thing that gives guys goosebumps. It's kinda sexy in a very nice way. Wish you could clone this as an injection! Have a great year and keep in touch. I haven't written anything yet this year (so I am a little jealous).

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/4/2013 3:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Duke ;}