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WHISPERS OF BOLOBOK

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WHISPERS OF BOLOBOK

Hussshhhh of the sea breeze
Bolobok Cave nears it
Rain drops falling on my face
Trim down my long pony-tailed hair
Small crabs crawling over the brownish sand surface
Small stones scattered over
 Small caves with limestone
And having freshwater downstairs
Said there were ladders to climb and unclimb
To see the down caves
Now in a mysterious looks waiting for renovations
Where are these caretakers of nature?
The beauty of eye lenses looking at it
Please come and rescue this whispering ambiance of serenity 
For generations to enjoy
If this is an early human settlement 
Come take your responsibility
Oh the caretakers please come
Thank you


3 January 2013
Early Human Settlement
Bolobok Cave (Sungab Bulubuk)
Bongao, Tawi-Tawi Island
Sulu Archipelago

 

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  1. Date: 1/4/2013 8:27:00 AM
    I believe the caretakers are watching these ancient sites. But people have to act as well. A truly moving poem.

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 7:30:00 AM
    I really enjoyed reading your poetry this morning, love the sensitivity of the poem and the desire for continuance, have a great day, and keep writing your inspirations, xxx