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UNLESS

UNLESS


No flower
Can claim beauty
Unless
Is touched by you
My LOVE!



©Demetrios Trifiatis
    4  January 2013

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  1. Date: 1/10/2013 12:10:00 AM

    Wow... that's really all I can say. Well written - JH

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 5:45:00 AM

    its a gift to say so much in so few words...enjoyed reading ur epigrams..:)

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 8:13:00 PM

    I just love a short beautiful poem such as this one!

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 2:37:00 PM

    What person could help but blush when told this poem. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 8:39:00 AM

    How true--A poetic way of stating that beauty is in the eye of the beholder. I always like it when a proverb is restated poetically. It takes a certain gift. Thanks

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/4/2013 10:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for your comment. I appreciate it. Probably I was not clear enough.” You” refers to the woman I offer the flower whose beauty is superior than that of the flower which has less beauty or no beauty at all. It becomes beautiful only when She, the one I love, touches it! So it is not a proverb stated differentlybut an original thought. Probably I should make it clearer to avoid misinterpretations.
  1. Date: 1/4/2013 4:54:00 AM

    Nice One Demetrios xx