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Excuses

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Excuses

words pouring from your mouth in disguise 
your shades of sin cause doubt within 
do not reason your desires 
reveal your inner secrets 
no explanations
stop telling me
excuses
just tell
why.

©Holly P. Moore
    January 2013

Black Eyed Susan “Excuses” Contest

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  1. Date: 1/29/2013 2:56:00 PM
    Absolutely beautiful poem, I love this poem. Nicely done poet. can you look at my poem please tell me what you think thanks

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 11:55:00 AM
    I see you were a winner- go figure! This is great. A belated congrats to you my lady!

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 6:48:00 AM
    - Good poem, congrats on your win my friend. - Have not "seen" you on loooong time, Holly - Hope you are doing well. ----- Have a nice day. - Big hug from Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 1:58:00 AM
    Holly still like this one...David will soup you later on today....

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:00:00 PM
    Holly, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 8:10:00 AM
    Holly big congrats on your win, hope you are feeling better...David

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:31:00 PM
    Congratulations, I enjoyed reading...Seren

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 3:09:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 8:27:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Holly xxx

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 8:07:00 PM
    Congratulations Holly. A great poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 5:51:00 PM
    Hi Holly, nice to see you on Susan's winning list... always~ PD

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 1:53:00 PM
    Lots of wisdom and insight shown in this poem, Holly...I need to learn more about this form...you did it very well! Congratulations to you! - Tim

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 12:16:00 AM
    So true! It is the hardest thing to tell why.

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 11:50:00 AM
    Soup mail...

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 2:02:00 PM
    soup mail....

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 11:35:00 AM
    You said that right. When people do something wrong, they invent all kind of excuses. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 11:15:00 AM
    Greatly done wishing you all the best my lovely holly winning wishes

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 11:01:00 AM
    Yep Holly this is good xx

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 9:18:00 AM
    Holly this is your form, good luck...David

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 10:33:00 PM
    Good One Holly, good luck in the contest ~Luv*SKAT