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SIJO -Virgin-

#3~"Lost not forgotten" 
"A solitary star had gone astray, yawning before the dark, 
hiding; straight ward, waver the wink of light, slowly fading. 
By my window I shed a tear; I farm the fields of my soul."


#2~"Down-under"
"Above the winter masses, buried, I wait for the sun. 
Sweet smelling kitchen, the hunger rise, within, my tongue swings... 
Rise away from the table... noisily I yell for my bike."


#3~"Dreaming with the God's"
"Downhill of Mount Olympus, everything felt real.
In the orchard of my dreams, I am structured as a statue. 
Mr. Sandman made a fool, of my midnight summer dream."

~SKAT~ 

SIJO contest. 

Take it easy on me, i'm a SIJO -Virgin-

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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 10:34:00 PM

    What means sijo? I think I know what a virgin is. You got me seriously intrigued.

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 3:22:00 PM

    Love the part, in the orchard of my dream, i am structured as a statue. Wonderfully explosive

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 3:19:00 PM

    Love the part, in the orchard of my dream, i am structured as a statue. Wonderfully explosive

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 1:30:00 AM

    It's beautiful, complex, pleasantly surreal and very good! Bravo S!

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 3:16:00 PM

    A SIJO virgin? not any more. lol

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 2:32:00 AM

    Well for being a sijo virgin you write pretty darn well! I liked the picturesque emotion in the first one the best. But Down-under appealed to my love for biking in the warm of the day. You definitely have the right idea for this style of poetry... the last line bringing the first two lines to a nice conclusion.

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 9:44:00 AM

    Well penned, Skat. i love the last sijo best. :)

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 12:24:00 AM

    Well penned sijo ..Good take on

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 2:00:00 PM

    I enjoyed it! Good job!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 5:53:00 PM

    Each one stands on its own, beautifully!!! Love all three!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 4:53:00 PM

    An interesting write.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 4:24:00 PM

    Exchange structure for romance Skat - it always works, but you've got to trust the resilience of your imagination - this poem is abstract for me and I like it so - a virgin with a voice - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:21:00 AM

    Dear Skat, You shimmer exquisite,within your every line.Beautiful poetry.Best wishes,Tracy.

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 1:12:00 AM

    HI skat, Sorry i had not had a look in at your poems in a while, But these sijos are ample compensation, love them all, thnx for your lovely visits:) Jag

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:56:00 PM

    I love the form you used, it is a difficult one for me to do, but you make it look easy, well done Skat xxx

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 7:35:00 AM

    Skat, lovely Sijo's , best of luck, constance

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 4:26:00 PM

    Something about # 3 that awakens the poet in me.

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 8:32:00 AM

    Hi there!!! Waiting for a new poem from you!

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 2:57:00 PM

    Aha!...I knew it!...By the way, you have nicely divided each sentence in the middle as a proper Sijo should... and the wording, structure and mystery of it ain't bad either! - Tim

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson Date: 1/28/2013 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Us here rednecks like you and me might pronounce it 'See-Joe' or 'See-ya-Joe' or 'Did you See-Joe?'
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:26:00 AM

    Depth of a winning work..Congrats on your placement...Sara

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 4:21:00 PM

    "I farm the fields of my soul" Very nice. I like the "Lost Not Forgotten" better. Nice work

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 9:37:00 AM

    Wonderful and Excellent piece,SKAT...Great job...Congrats on your superb win...

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 5:53:00 AM

    Well done SKAT.... Seren

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 1:17:00 AM

    I'm so glad to read again this excellent Sijo of yours my dearest Skat and find it in the top winning list! Big congratulations! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 7:01:00 PM

    congrats on your win Skat

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 4:54:00 PM

    Hi sis,,,...Congratulations in Rick's awesome "SIJO" contest. take care~PD

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 3:05:00 PM

    Nice to know I am not the only Sijo virgin. Well dode.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 2:24:00 PM

    Three amazing Sijos! Congratulations on your fine win! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 1:49:00 PM

    hey you sijo virgin you. Looky at YOU. BIG congrats for your big win!! (guess what your captcha said? BEER. hahaha)

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 11:28:00 AM

    Not just one beauty, but three! Well done, Skat!! Congratulations!

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