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SIJO -Virgin-

#3~"Lost not forgotten" 
"A solitary star had gone astray, yawning before the dark, 
hiding; straight ward, waver the wink of light, slowly fading. 
By my window I shed a tear; I farm the fields of my soul."


#2~"Down-under"
"Above the winter masses, buried, I wait for the sun. 
Sweet smelling kitchen, the hunger rise, within, my tongue swings... 
Rise away from the table... noisily I yell for my bike."


#3~"Dreaming with the God's"
"Downhill of Mount Olympus, everything felt real.
In the orchard of my dreams, I am structured as a statue. 
Mr. Sandman made a fool, of my midnight summer dream."

~SKAT~ 

SIJO contest. 

Take it easy on me, i'm a SIJO -Virgin-

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  1. Date: 2/27/2014 10:23:00 AM

    Nice job, SV! Fun stuff...

  1. Date: 2/22/2014 3:04:00 PM

    Hi Skat, I know nothing about any poetry forms so I can't comment on the form itself. I do know what I enjoy reading and these three pieces I enjoyed. I know when I think something is well written, these three pieces were well written. Your vision in each comes forth with such ease. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 2/1/2014 7:36:00 AM

    I also am a novice in the Sijo form, but from the description in Wikipedia, you seem to have Nailed it"!...:-) Nice imagery! Good Poems! Enjoyed this from you; Robert, xoxoxo

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 9:27:00 AM

    Poetic freeverse nice visuals! The take on olympus and the sandman great to read. Sweet dreams skat. And what's a sijo virgin? R u still one?:) ;) warmest cheers. Fond thanx 4 d win nws. Me zay.

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 12:12:00 AM

    well, Goodnight Skat. Time for my beddy bye!!!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 5:49:00 PM

    should read: ...oh what has the poet done to me to keep me chained to such beauty? You plant in that field of your soul seeds of beautiful emotions put into words for we here to enjoy in meditation. A way to say it that makes us see life in a different context, to farm the fields of my soul, Oh yes!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 5:46:00 PM

    one line: I FARM THE FIELDS OF MY SOUL. and WOW. If one line makes an emotion grow in the mind of heart, oh hat has the poet done to me to keep me jained to such beauty. bob a.k.a Robert Henry Poulin

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 2:34:00 PM

    You are an incredible writer, wish I could write like that, thanks for the read Skat Peter

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 9:19:00 AM

    yes! :-)

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 8:13:00 AM

    I submit to be your student, You write great, I must admit, You are great.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 3:05:00 AM

    As always-- fantastic write. Have never come across a SIJO format before, so , besides the topic matter, I found this interesting.

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 6:36:00 PM

    I love this poem and am faving it to read over. Must check out the Sijo Form. I will be a virgin with you. LOL

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 5:27:00 AM

    Never forget, the stars, the sun and the Gods all shine and pray for you, SKAT Aces-

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 5:27:00 AM

    Never forget, the stars, the sun and the Gods all shine and pray for you, SKAT Aces-

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 2:20:00 PM

    Very nice write, thanks Skat

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 1:28:00 AM

    dreaming with the gods-mount Olympus-the flow is lovely

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 5:23:00 PM

    I don't know this form so can only comment as a poem. well penned Shadow

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 4:54:00 AM

    beautiful work! Kim

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 3:22:00 PM

    Love the part, in the orchard of my dream, i am structured as a statue. Wonderfully explosive

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 3:19:00 PM

    Love the part, in the orchard of my dream, i am structured as a statue. Wonderfully explosive

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 3:16:00 PM

    A SIJO virgin? not any more. lol

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 2:32:00 AM

    Well for being a sijo virgin you write pretty darn well! I liked the picturesque emotion in the first one the best. But Down-under appealed to my love for biking in the warm of the day. You definitely have the right idea for this style of poetry... the last line bringing the first two lines to a nice conclusion.

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 9:44:00 AM

    Well penned, Skat. i love the last sijo best. :)

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 12:24:00 AM

    Well penned sijo ..Good take on

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 2:00:00 PM

    I enjoyed it! Good job!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 5:53:00 PM

    Each one stands on its own, beautifully!!! Love all three!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 4:53:00 PM

    An interesting write.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 4:24:00 PM

    Exchange structure for romance Skat - it always works, but you've got to trust the resilience of your imagination - this poem is abstract for me and I like it so - a virgin with a voice - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:21:00 AM

    Dear Skat, You shimmer exquisite,within your every line.Beautiful poetry.Best wishes,Tracy.

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 1:12:00 AM

    HI skat, Sorry i had not had a look in at your poems in a while, But these sijos are ample compensation, love them all, thnx for your lovely visits:) Jag

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