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10 Reactions to Flower Petals

The world quickly dissipates in your hand
and petals droop solemnly without forgiveness.

Here, a woman’s hope is crushed 
Because of one malicious rose
And the lonely dandelion
You plucked at seven 
without heart,
who loved you not,
haunts you threateningly in your gut,
lying. 

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:01:00 PM

    Alexandra Espeset Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 3:15:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 8:19:00 PM

    Great concept. congratulations on your win. LoveJ

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 5:52:00 PM

    Alexandra, nice to see you on Susan's winning list... always~ PD

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 11:55:00 PM

    i liked this one great job

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 12:48:00 PM

    ‡ Sounds Somewhat Malicious Itself, Sweet Beautiful Alexandra ˜ Scorn Spite Jealousy Hate, On And On ? Someone Insecure About Perhaps Most Things Including Life ? Very Powerful Poe Girl! 'Happy New Year.' My Love, Always, Rachel *