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*This poem was written when I was seven years old... pretty good for a seven year old, eh?

Beyond the Earth's crust
lies what all desire always.
I'll do what it takes.

Reach doesn't matter.
As I long as I can possess
the key to the box.

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  1. Date: 4/9/2013 8:35:00 AM

    thts great.....4 a seven yrs dude....awesome....:)

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 9:17:00 AM

    I'm impressed!

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 3:30:00 AM

    Did you ever find out what was in that box ;}

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 2:13:00 AM

    Wonderful write for seven years old and for seventy seven...

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 7:32:00 AM

    genius boy ;) awesome write friend Jacob :) thanks for sharing. Good day!! hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 6:57:00 AM

    Jacob pretty good...David

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 3:19:00 PM

    Nicely done for only being seven, thanks so much, for your enduring comment on my poem play date....

    Cramer Avatar Jacob Cramer Date: 1/25/2013 7:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, and I only comment what people deserve. Your poem was OUTSTANDING!
  1. Date: 1/3/2013 2:55:00 PM

    I'd say you were a brilliant child Thanks so much for stopping by my writes, I so enjoy your visits. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 11:05:00 AM

    Yes it is: pretty good for a seven year old,boy. //oxox Anne-Lise :)