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  1. Date: 1/22/2013 5:52:00 PM

    What is real is left to every artists imagination. interesting write david

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 11:49:00 PM

    It feels so wonderful in the fantasy world yoi vr created.I sooo love the marshmallow pillow.Thanks for the journey :)Happy Sunday

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 9:40:00 PM

    I love this, as well as I believe in fairies.. going in fav's ;}

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 8:39:00 PM

    Always a fan of fantasy... and your work! I haven't written a terzanelle before, interesting rhyme structure. Maybe for a contest one of these days!

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 10:41:00 AM

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  1. Date: 1/13/2013 9:06:00 AM

    Great fantasy write David!...Sounds like this could be turned into a children's book...Congratulations! - Tim

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:48:00 AM

    David, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 10:46:00 AM

    I looooooooove this- what a wonderful fantasy. Great win, David!!

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:20:00 AM

    Smashing write David, and congratulations on your winning spot, proud to share it with you xx

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 1:17:00 AM

    Congrats on your win David! You've done it very well.

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:37:00 PM

    fantastic write friend David. Congratulations on your win!! cheers!! :)

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:48:00 PM

    Hi David.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ TEX

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:47:00 PM

    Now I'd love to see this illustrated!! yeah..go David!!Congrads on your win Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:38:00 PM

    Excellent poem David, congrats on your special win xxx

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 6:58:00 PM

    Great fell a rythm to this piece. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 11:41:00 AM

    Funny, especially the corncobs and marshmallows!

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 7:16:00 AM

    I think your title fits perfectly. I find this form of poem to be difficult, but you did a wonderful job! I really enjoyed it

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 4:09:00 PM

    quite interesting. You made it almost surreal. Just as a dream should be in the land of Nod. GREAT title for it.

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 2:28:00 PM

    Robert Lewis Stevenson in a silly mood. Hope you and your wife are hanging in. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:23:00 AM

    This is really well written David, a poem to be proud of. - BRAVO!! Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 12:41:00 AM

    This is the land i love to live in especially when days get cloudy and nights are cold.I m lovin it parapapapa;)

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 7:18:00 PM

    I love it!

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 6:53:00 PM

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  1. Date: 1/5/2013 12:02:00 PM

    just love this, David! My very best wishes to you and Geraldine : )

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 7:39:00 AM

    Can I have a glass please David? love it xx

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 4:20:00 AM

    We all can get all imagination running wild. Awesome job, David. I love it. Have a great weekend! :)

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 4:48:00 PM

    I love planted a mixture of scenery in my mind, but each one I could see clearly.

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 2:16:00 PM

    a fantastical write that reads a bit like a nursery rhyme; I like the internal rhyme and the wordplay, great fun :-)

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 9:49:00 PM

    a precious poem David, the image shows one can't be kept up at night ~Luv*SKAT

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 12:41:00 PM

    This is splendid David, I think it's the best one I've read for the contest, I love it xxxRose