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Lettin' go

Lettin’ go




I am here in my present
(Leaving behind my past)

I am hurting and I am a human being 

I long to be loved by a good man

I am a beautiful black ‘chocolate’ full figured woman I wear a 42-44D bra and am something like 210 pounds

Love me or Hate me; either way I am goin’ to love me so if you accept me and love me that’s good but if you hate then go on and hate me

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  1. Date: 3/21/2013 2:36:00 AM

    thank you for the comment. You totally right about wat u said bout ma poem but english s not ma mother tongue and i bare speak it, why because i live in switzerland. like your poem

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim Date: 3/21/2013 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are so welcome. Thanks for the like.
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 11:16:00 AM

    Nice poem indeed.

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim Date: 3/1/2013 6:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joe.
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:43:00 PM

    Its good how you choose to express your longing and feelings by your words.. yeah! though i think that you really didn't have to mention anything about your figure or color. The best line in the poem is the last one.. :) anyways, so I'm gonna follow your poems now..

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim Date: 2/23/2013 9:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I needed to talk about my figure and my color. I talk about my own personal issues/myself. I wished to express them in my Poem because I turned 30 before I felt gorgeous pretty or good-looking I always felt ugly all the time before that and I had weight issues since childhood too so I did. But thank you for your comments...
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 1:02:00 PM

    Ayesha whatever you do don't let go of those thoughts, I don't think you need to say anything about your colour or figure, your thoughts are from the heart and I like that, well done...David

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:00:00 PM

    Sometimes I can't get to everyone that reads my poetry, but I'm here now. It is always good to leave the past behind. You are a special person why, because God made you. Smile - JESUS loves you. Lucilla

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim Date: 1/20/2013 7:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Lucilla I love your picture your profile and your cowboy hat. I will smile and I am special. God loves me too. Nothing but the best I wish for you in the future one Poet to another Poet.
  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:11:00 PM

    Agree with Juanita.......in your heart ! - Love from // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 11:31:00 PM

    It is what's on the inside that counts....remember that. If you can honestly like yourself as a person, then who cares what others' think.....

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 8:17:00 AM

    and i bet your beautiful....no homo. just saying.