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Rape And Abuse

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Rape And Abuse

Cries for help went awry ,
anguish and pain went in vain
lost battle of life before a coward.
Groping and forcing on a girl  does not
 make a man strong just proves that he is a beast,
and unfit to be among people.
Taking away a girl's modesty
is not a most heroic act
but a heinous crime which
even ferocious beast would not have.
Curse the moment when these 
sick are born with lust all the time.
Even girls are afraid to
be mothers,raise kids like these.
The power of a man lies in character
and heart but not in sexual supremacy or desires.


(Dedicated to Nirbhaya,who  was brutally raped and died fighting for her life.And all those who have been victims.Let's raise our standards and respect women everywhere ,without her there is no world.)

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  1. Date: 4/23/2014 6:10:00 AM
    Sad and powerful. Definitely a winner. Congrats on your placement in the contest.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 4/24/2014 12:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much
  1. Date: 4/21/2014 11:39:00 PM
    Oooh, I see this was a winner congrats, Kenisha.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 4/22/2014 4:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so mcuh :).have a great day.
  1. Date: 4/21/2014 10:28:00 PM
    Congrats Kenisha, sorry to see this disease of pain inflicting is world wide ....the victim often thinks she is alone . .Seren

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 4/22/2014 4:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for reading.yes,the survivor is victimised more than the culprit.
  1. Date: 4/21/2014 6:40:00 PM
    Kenisha, , Loved how you extracted this one away. Congratulations, this is a great win, for such a painful and realistic theme, when writing about this topic, In which phantom's around Abused Women. Have a nice day:) ~LINDA

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 4/22/2014 4:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much :).its very sad ordeal which many women face and go through.hope that this abuse ends forever.
  1. Date: 4/21/2014 4:56:00 PM
    Thank you for entering the contest, Kenisha and congratulations on your placement. A very sad and too-often told tale. I loved your line: "Groping and forcing on a girl does not make a man strong just proves that he is a beast." Actually, it is the weak and cowards of our gender who become the abusers. The courageous are those like you who speak out against it. Thanks. Joe

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 4/22/2014 4:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for appreciating my work and made me a winner.:)
  1. Date: 3/7/2014 10:25:00 AM
    "You touched my soul Kenisha. Its been more than a year and the odd story continues. No one knows why these things happen.Praying for a better tomorrow."

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 3/8/2014 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for reading.Its sad that this still continues ,hope good days come along .
  1. Date: 10/26/2013 4:34:00 AM
    A sad one Kenisha,so sorry for the loss of your friend. My close friend was raped recently...last week. I dedicated one of my poems to her. Welcome to poetrysoup dear one. Love and hugs, Bob-based on belief.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 10/27/2013 10:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for reading and i wish your friend overcomes that and may god give her the strength.
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 12:01:00 AM
    good selection of topic. Its sad it's still left undecided though.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 5/12/2013 3:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you and its very sad that this heinous crime rate is increasing.
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:47:00 PM
    Yes only good Mothers can raise good son. Light & Love

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 3/8/2013 3:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes very true and thank you so much for the comment
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 9:36:00 AM
    whilst there are human beings, male and female such beastly acts will happen. Such is the world today. Well written poem. Seren

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 2/4/2013 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for your words.
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 7:26:00 AM
    sad,heart felt,rape is a world crime,all we soupers should write about this topic and make a statement to these sick men and women,wonderful write Kenisha

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 2/3/2013 6:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for your words and support.
  1. Date: 2/2/2013 12:44:00 AM
    Thnx Kenisha for your poem and comments!! Jag

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 2:21:00 AM
    Dear Kenisha You have written very nice poem with alerting these vulnerable males of society who do not know the value of human life. Very good writing. Thank you.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 1/28/2013 6:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much.hope that people realise the value of human life.
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 8:29:00 PM
    kenisha shines, this is a sad but well done dedication...this topic is very hard for me... thank you for sharing the power behind your pen...PD

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 1/28/2013 2:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much.
  1. Date: 1/25/2013 7:12:00 AM
    Im so moved by your poem... it's truly captivated the horror and pain of the act. Also thank you for enjoying Myday (one of my poems you commented on)

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 1/26/2013 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much .
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:44:00 AM
    Stopping by your page with a thanks for all your comments at mine.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 1/22/2013 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 10:10:00 PM
    An extremely powerful piece. Thank you for writing it. Jack

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 1/20/2013 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much.have a great day.
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 8:54:00 AM
    sad write Kenisha,time for men to be men

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 1/19/2013 6:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes very true and thank you for the comment.
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 7:15:00 AM
    Hi Kenisha great dedication and spot on could not agree more, thanks for your comments, all the best Owen

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 1/17/2013 7:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much.have a great time.
  1. Date: 1/3/2013 2:38:00 AM
    Glad you penned a tribute to this brave girl Nirbhaya...those were truly brutal people.

    shines Avatar kenisha shines
    Date: 1/3/2013 6:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for the comment and they are harmful to be living in our society.
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