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Judgment, Bloody Judgment

When before the throne the Lamb advocated,
For those countless Souls in arbitration,
He reached for the Book without hesitation,
On the altar the Lamb's blood inundated.
God's chosen Lamb being consecrated,
Present at the Earth's foundation,
Then witnessing her mighty cessation,
This Lamb of God now mediated.
For a moment the time seemed to stall,
As blood from the altar spilled to the floor,
Many there were, in search of a door,
But the serpent, on his belly, crawled.
Each Soul stood complacently consigned,
To Hell's fire or Heaven sublime.

To Hell's fire or Heaven sublime,
Every head bowed, every Soul felt speculation,
Be it Heavenly bliss or eternal damnation?
For by righteousness or sins defined,
What was forgotten was in the book to remind.
As time after time, each Soul fell to temptation,
No stone left unturned in this lengthy investigation.
But for the glory of God this moment was designed.
Minions of Souls, of every nationality,
Pale and cold, as dripping sweat insinuates,
The guilt, the shame, the fear that alienates.
Not jot nor tittle removed from prophesy's biblicality.
Sins of darkness were brought to light,
From Hell's fire the demons took flight.

From Hell's fire the demons took flight,
Swooping down low upon the congregation,
As the fire flamed higher in Hell's orchestration,
While Lucifer's laughter offered no respite.
The smoke and the ash suffocated the light,
The sins of the Soul weighed heavy in condemnation,
Then each Soul experienced the evils of segregation.
Isolated, and shamed with immobilizing fright,
Some Souls did faint, their strength grew frail,
When out of the smoke came the Rose of Sharon,
Bound and tied, bloody, whipped, and beaten.
Countless Souls saw plainly where they gained or failed.
Composure denied, though the Soul struggled diligently,
To loose the bonds of sudden accountability.

To loose the bonds of sudden accountability,
Each Soul, a nail in fleshy augmentation,
Slammed into a beam of bloody fermentation.
Throwing stones at a young woman's assailibility,
Convenient doctrines demanding public proclamation,
Heresies and Pharisees in close association.
Each Soul bore the weight of responsibility.
Loud wailing was heard with gnashing of teeth,
While Lucifer's laughter rang out over all these things,
Then more demons took flight, with great and mighty wings,
As a burning sword was loosed from destruction's sheath.
The Lamb opened the Book of Life, judgment to confer,
He called out the first name written, "Lucifer."

He called out the first name written, "Lucifer."
Then an army of Angels appeared in mighty demonstration,
To witness Old Lucifer's final eternal annihilation;
Around the throne sweet incense was implored,
As Lucifer came forth with his minions to proffer,
"Take these," he began, "some of my closest associations,
Take dishonesty, theft, and the greed of the nations."
Then these sins on the altar were offered,
As Lucifer grinned with sheepish beguilement,
The blood of the Lamb arose in hostility,
Covering those sins with absolute capability.
Each Soul experienced honesty and enlightenment.
With the truth now clear for each Soul to discern,
Old Lucifer grew tempered with anger to burn.

Old Lucifer grew tempered with anger to burn.
Displaying murder, lust, and war's devastation,
The blood on the altar covered these evil manifestations.
But within himself, Old Lucifer's patience churned.
As the cosmic wheels of divine justice slowly turned,
Lucifer became enamored with his own amplified palpitations,
Biting the heel of humility, in his moment of greatest tribulation.
"I AM GREATER THAN THOU!" The Lamb, he spurned.
Then an Angel brought forth keys, as the Lamb was inclined,
To protect the Soul from sinful separation,
Due to Old Lucifer's dishonest inclination.
The Lamb held the keys, and to Hell, Lucifer was confined.
Then the Lamb came forward and smashed the Serpent's head.
Now that Old Culprit, Lucifer, was eternally dead.

Now that Old Culprit, Lucifer, was eternally dead,
Received in the end, the Lamb's final summation,
As the Soul was washed clean of sin's sedimentation.
Each sin covered on the altar where the Lamb bled.
Never again would a Soul know sin or experience death,
The Soul felt it's worth as the beloved creation,
Brothers of Christ, in eternal salvation.
Filled with brotherly love, the Soul, felt blessed.
A new Heaven and a new Earth appeared,
Where Eden was restored to it's celestial estate,
Of the Tree of Life each Soul was free to partake,
But having knowledge the law was revered,
Eat not of the Tree in the midst, mandated.
When before the throne the Lamb advocated.

( an older poem...I have been so UNinspired, yet wanted to post SOMETHING! lol :) I have learned that since I wrote this Crown of Sonnets, it should have been done in meter, so...maybe one day I will sit down to revise it...but not today! Hugs, Catie :)

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  1. Date: 5/6/2013 11:30:00 PM

    I will have to reread this tomorrow, its after 1 am... I "got" 4 and a half of the verses, and then became befuddled... I am not sure why, but I saw you as having Christ forgiving and freeing Lucifer, that even he could be sanctified... especially with "take these... greed." I love the language, imagery.. I'm just exhausted, I suspect, hence the head scratching. I have wanted to write something about Judas for a while, who pulled the short straw, if you ask me ;-) What true choice did he have?

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 5/7/2013 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I do agree about Judas. It was God's plan, and it was a dirt job but someone had to do it. I am not sure that I would have behaved any different after the betrayal, given the soul shaking experience it must have been. yep! :)
    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 5/7/2013 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    cont.... So, in the end, it is mankind who are saved from the fires of Hell, as each soul is enlightened by the truth, and old Lucifer, himself is cast into oblivion. Hope that helps. hugs, catie :)
    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 5/7/2013 8:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No, Cyndi, what I was going for, is that Lucifer, and his minions (the darkness and the demons) were the only ones sentenced, and therefore, locked in the puts of hell before hell, itself, was thrown into the lake of fire. Now, Lucifer, being the devil that he is, tries to bargin and trade his way out of hell, but Christ, the blood of Christ, has already redeemed man from these sins.
  1. Date: 3/12/2013 4:05:00 PM

    I really just wanted to see what a crown of sonnets was. I looked here and of course the definition is limited. Sonnets were my original form to write with. Well Shakespearean sonnet form. I have since used the quatrain, villanelle and Quatern. I see the repetiton here that the sonnet calls for. I will do more research, but I wanted to say first say, I really like this poem. I actually normally do not like deep christain themes in poems, but this is excellently written. Good work.

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 4:14:00 PM

    Powerful indeed. A write of this magnitude needs no changing. Leave it limitless, like God, and let this meter sometimes spirit : )

    ML Avatar SCRIBE ML Date: 2/9/2013 4:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Just for doing a Crown, I applaud you!
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:33:00 AM

    Hi sis...been a long time sweets. And what a mouthfull this is. I know much thought was put to paper here. Excellent rewrite. I hope you are well, in mind and body. blessings sis. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 10:38:00 AM

    Hi Catie, this is an epic poem, well done even if not in meter, maybe you can create a new way of doing a crown of sonnets, I also want to thank you so much for my placement in your Message In A Bottle Contest, I am so honoured. Constance

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 1/7/2013 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you are very welcome, Constance. It is an awesome poem. Hugs, Catie :)
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 10:22:00 AM

    love this Catie, so powerful so profound,, awesome theme and awesome write,,,

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 7:46:00 AM

    A very powerful write Catie, I loved it's intensity, hair raising affect Catie, don't worry about the dry spell, it never lasts, all writers feel it, we just need to sit with it, soon you'll be spilling from your heart again, thinking of you today and sending you a muse from the heavens, keep it in your pocket or better still close to your heart, have a blessed day my dear woman. xxx Rose