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In the web

A butterfly blissfully floating through
Gets caught in a spider's silky trap
A life and death battle ensues
It struggles as its wings flap

Then the spider moves in for the kill
As the butterfly struggles still
Finally , it escapes from the silky threads
Soaring to freedom as its wings spread

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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:00:00 PM

    a sweet win~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:59:00 AM

    Joseph, :-) Congratulations in Debbie's fine " EIGHT Lines any KIND " contest. enjoy your day... PD

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 7:21:00 PM

    Hey!!!! Nice one!

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:37:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 1/13/2013 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks you Debbie........glad I was able to place in your contest
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 11:00:00 AM

    Joseph congrats on your HM...David

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 4:32:00 AM

    Congrats on your HM Joseph xx

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:09:00 AM

    Poor spider lost it's Buttery dinner,

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 8:38:00 PM

    Glad it got away, congrats......Seren

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 6:35:00 PM

    so is this different slightly from the other one I read earlier today? I will have to reread the other one to see.

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 1/4/2013 4:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes..its the same poem in a different form....
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 5:07:00 PM

    Joseph, this is very creative. A butterfly symbolizing our survival for life. Just beautiful. Hoping you had a lovely New Year. Hugs and luv, Gail