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My Netherlands
my lowland and its flatness
westernmost always my sea
dunes and dikes protective mattress
villagers sing their warm heartfelt plea
bracing fragrances excite
salty winds homely statements
windmills and hamlets always in sight
wooden shoes vocalize on pavements
white clouds and greenest meadows
nowhere views without a bike
lots of white and black dots create cows
always water behind the dike
©Ellie Daphne 2013
EIGHT Lines any KIND
Contest Judged: 1/12/2013 12:00:00 AM
Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi
10th place awarded.
Note:
re-written after judging (3rd stanza)
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