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the Christmas tree

the Christmas tree stands ornaments on center and top... grandson now thirteen
I know not correct Haiku.. When my children were coming up, I would let them help decorate the tree. One year all the decorations were on the two bottom tiers.. The same way with my grandsons.. This year I asked Caleb who is thirteen now to come help. When I thought we were finished, I stepped back and looked...Most of the ornaments were in the middle and close to the top..He has really grown..

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  1. Date: 1/2/2013 7:57:00 PM

    Been there and done that, was aware the Christmas tree was such a good growth chart.

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 4:59:00 PM

    Aw, this is so touching Sara. Thanks for sharing a piece of your family cherished moments with us. Love always, Gail

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 1:12:00 PM

    I think it's a beautiful haiku, my friend - forgive me for only reading one of your poems tonight (so much catching up to do) but I'll read more tomorrow. Congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:31:00 PM

    They do grow so quick I was putting nappies on mine last week they are 6'4 this week I don't know when it happened it was so quick. You will need a bigger tree next year xx

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:10:00 PM

    A great Haiku Sara. Rollo

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 11:25:00 AM

    They do grow up quickly Sara! I loved this amazing and wondrous Haiku, even if it isn't the traditional Haiku! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and enlightening poem this afternoon! What a glorious piece, unfortunately the Christmas tree now comes down...ours is down now, life is back to normal! Great Work with this write!!

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 10:05:00 AM

    Your little bio really enhanced my understanding of your haiku. I really enjoyed this.

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 9:56:00 AM

    Lol, it's great. He is all grown. Cute poem, Sara. Have a Happy New Year! Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 8:32:00 AM

    Hi my dear friend, Sara! But, this is GREAT! I love it and had enjoyed reading it! Happy happy New Year to you and your love ones! love/hugs, Leonora