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The First Time Ever I Saw Your face

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The First Time Ever I Saw Your face

The first time ever I saw your face
It was at the wrong time and in the wrong place
There was no coffee bar but a castle for two
That’s the first time, that I ever saw you.

The look of surprise and of love shone my way
No discomfort no shyness made a wonderful day
The first time ever I saw your face
I never thought it would really take place.

The touch of your hand on my waiting fingers
The spark of love still sits there and it still lingers
The first time ever I saw your face
My eyes closed, I can feel where my fingers did trace.

To learn the lines and the smile that I love so much
To feel the warmth of your heart in every tender touch
The first time ever I saw your face
That now haunts me and fills every single space.

A face that looks my way, although from afar
A face I see next to mine, that shines as a star.
The first time ever I saw your face
Is embedded in my heart and will never be backspaced.

© 1/12/2012~GG~


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  1. Date: 1/2/2013 9:43:00 PM
    WOW! This is good, it brings back memories of the past. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 3:24:00 PM
    exceleltn*LUV~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 8:52:00 AM
    Let's see here, Mandy...First line-first verse...got it!...Repeat the third line in the following four?...And rhyme it too? Darn!...I'm getting confused again (I'm a slow learner)...This poem makes me week in the knees...Happy New Year! - Tim

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 7:21:00 AM
    Mandy......just lovely !!!! - - Looking forward to many pleasant poems and comments from you in 2013. - HAPPY NEW YEAR ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 5:19:00 AM
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 2:23:00 AM
    Wow!! superb write my friend Mandy..I like it!!love is in the air.. Happy New year!! wish you all the best. Hugs, Maria :)

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 8:20:00 PM
    A beautiful write, Mandy! Lovely imagery that draws in the reader! Love it! Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Annalise

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    Back at you and thanks Annalise love xx
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 5:36:00 PM
    A memorable poem Mandy, very beautiful and heart felt, enjoyed xxx Rose

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    Thanks Rose xx
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 4:08:00 PM
    I like the theme, rhythm, rhyme, and flow of this one...I like the use of the line from the song..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Yes, they grow up very fast but when we were in the middle of it sometimes it seem long..Sara

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    Date: 1/2/2013 2:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Bless you Sara love xx
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 1:51:00 PM
    beautiful write, Mandy. Thanks for all your support. Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )

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    As long as you need it Jack xx
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 1:07:00 PM
    Great piece Mandy... There's always a first time. Hope your mind house this memorable visage... Thanks for stopping by... Love... Angel

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    Thanks Angel xx
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:13:00 PM
    Hi Mandy, this is really a great read my friend, and love the ending, backspaced, really good. Rollo

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    Date: 1/5/2013 5:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello My name is miss Selena,i am a young girl I was impressed when i saw your profile today and i will like to establish a long lasting relationship with you,here is my id (selenach2s@yahoo.com ) so that i can tell you more about myself and give you my picture. Thanks Yours Miss Selena
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    Thanks Rollo xx
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 10:52:00 AM
    Mandy, knowing the song that this title came from, I just had to see this poem. You emulate the feeling of love that was in that song from years ago. This is full of your heart!

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    Thanks Andy , high praise love xx
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 9:22:00 AM
    wonderful write GG,love it,enjoy 2013

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    Date: 1/1/2013 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard xx
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 9:17:00 AM
    Lovely poem, Mandy So soft! Love it.. Have a Happy New Year. Enjoy and have fun. Love ya, Toquyen

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    Thanks Love and the same to you xx
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 9:16:00 AM
    Very tender, beautiful, dear Mandy... Happy New Year... Terry

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    Thanks Terry and back to you my friend xx
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 7:50:00 AM
    this is truly wonderful, absolutly a classical poem. Mandy you have written some awesome poetry, and this just makes it get better and better.

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    Wow thank you kind sir, my head will not get through the door xx
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 7:00:00 AM
    so lovely written dear GG... wishing you a Happy Happy new year ..much luv and hugs :)

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    Thanks Sukmawati love and all the best to you and yours xx
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 6:03:00 AM
    Beautifully written and resonates on a deep chord of truth, thanks!

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    Hi and thanks Justin , and a Happy New Year to you and yours xx