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Caught In The Sun

I'm caught in the sun
Shining its rays onto me
Breathing in salt air
Taking in the blue green sea
Footprints left upon the sand

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  1. Date: 2/2/2013 11:21:00 AM

    What a pleasant scene. So descriptive and appealing to the senses. I think I forgot what sunshine is.

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/3/2013 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's snowing big flakes adding to the already white covered ground, gray skies, no sun. Winter begone and spring bring in the sun. Thanks for stopping my and for you lovely comment. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 6:51:00 PM

    I love the walk... pleasant... and warm... wishing to enjoy a real image like this soon,, summer comes a bit to quick here in Texas.. always~PD

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/28/2013 6:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lucky. I'm in Michigan, warmth, not until June/July for me. Winter usually in Florida, but had surgery Jan 8th and another will have first part of May so I'm staying in the very cooooold weather. Thanks for stopping by. Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 4:07:00 PM

    Next I walk on the beach near my home, I will think of your poem. Wishing you a pleasant weekend. Love, Su

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/6/2013 6:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Suzette thank you your lovely comment. The sand, sea and all its offering is a wonderful place to be. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 12:21:00 PM

    Oh! This takes me to beauty days spent on the beaches of Cyprus! :) Thanks for capturing the magic so well! Also...thanks for the post.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 1/5/2013 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oooopssss....typo! Beautiful days...silly me!
  1. Date: 1/3/2013 6:03:00 AM

    Very refreshing and youthful! Adore it! Thank you for your comment. Hugs!

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/3/2013 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Demetrios for your comment. The sun, sand and sea's salt air I'll miss this year. I must stay back in my cold home state I fear. Burrrrrr to cold., Warm Smiles Connie
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 7:56:00 PM

    I love your Tanka, Connie...it will do well in the contest, I'm sure! A beauty. Love, Annalise

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 1/2/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your comment Annalise. I wish I were leaving footprints on the sand. It's so cold here in Michigan. Warm Smiles, Connie