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limerick in my pocket

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limerick in my pocket

In the following months to come
Want to lose the weight off my bum
Will go to the gym
Will try to think thin
But to toffees I will succumb

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  1. Date: 1/30/2013 1:09:00 AM
    Nice one, I am really uneducated about so many forms, I don't even want to look at the list. I actually after reviewing, remember this one. Nice poem, you said bum,haha "english" humor and you used that near rhyme again, clever clever. Now I think I have exceeded the amount of comments I can give without being reported for stalking, thanks for sharing the wonderful poems.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/30/2013 7:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    haha you missed one called white Tears, was watching the snow come down when i wrote it..Seren
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 3:13:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/18/2013 5:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debbie....Seren
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 2:06:00 PM
    Good taste to which to succumb..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/18/2013 2:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Sara
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 11:30:00 PM
    seren, I am seeing this one for the first time, and I have to say, you really did a nice job with your limerick. I really like it. Congrats for your win.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/18/2013 2:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Andrea
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 5:26:00 PM
    Well done,.. but to lose too much off there doesn't seem a good idea. Congrats, Seren. Have yourself a wonderful year!! Jag

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/16/2013 5:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jag ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 6:40:00 AM
    congrats on your win Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/16/2013 5:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Joseph
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 10:42:00 AM
    Good one Seren!Enjoyed the read.Congrats on your win.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/15/2013 12:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kash...Seren
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:41:00 AM
    Seren, ~ congratulations with the awesome win in Rix's "A Limerick in My Pocket Contest " contest. xox~pd

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/15/2013 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you PD ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 7:38:00 AM
    Congratulations Seren love this one, leave the toffees behind xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/15/2013 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol you wont eat then Mandy, you would rather a sausage roll....LOL
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 5:51:00 AM
    nice job! congrats on placing in the contest!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/15/2013 12:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks Ilene ....Seren
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 12:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win, Senen. Yes, those toffees..... Yum. Love, Su

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/15/2013 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Su
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 1:23:00 PM
    Great limerick, friend. I wish you luck in the contest.... I like the looks of your portfolio... I will be sampling ocassionally... Jake

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/6/2013 6:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Jake nice to see you here, thanks for commenting...Seren
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 2:16:00 AM
    Hi Sheren what a lovely limerick to start my saturday with lol loved it, al the best Owen

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/5/2013 2:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Owen, the limerick or the subject lol. Nice to see you here....Seren
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:20:00 PM
    Hi Seren, I am a sucker for Limericks, and this one I really love. Rollo

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/1/2013 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hmmm you a toffee eater too rollo, you can keep yuour chocs, some thorntons toffee especially treacle and licquorice, yummy
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 9:37:00 AM
    Dear Seren, You should not throw away what you have …gained! Ha-ha. Lovely and refreshing writing. Thank for commenting on my poem: TIME ANEW. Happy New Year!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/1/2013 11:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    nooo will not throw away, just diminish it slowly ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 7:47:00 AM
    so lovely... very creative work !!! <3 OXOX

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/1/2013 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for stopping by and for your comments
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 5:18:00 AM
    Lol join the group of many who will blow it on sweet sugary treats. A great limerick Seren. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/1/2013 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    would I do a thing like that lol yea I would.....Seren
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 3:21:00 AM
    I enjoyed another wonderful limerick of yours. Very witty.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/1/2013 4:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol getting hard now to think of what to write one on ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 3:06:00 AM
    :)))

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/1/2013 4:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Kash is that a smile she says with fingers crossed......Happy New Year to you....Seren