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The three fork

trees are building the walls
the sun shows the stalls
leaves color the roof
along the path I hoof

damped footsteps resonate
wait and hesitate
in front a three fork 
a forested torque 

along the smallest path 
with a homely lath 
branches move aside
light rises a new tide 

talking causes a blot 
a small hidden spot
with a heavenly gun
a pond mirrors the sun

©Ellie Daphne 2013


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  1. Date: 1/5/2013 2:14:00 AM

    Hi Ellie might bring a picnic sounds so beautifiul, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 10:29:00 AM

    It sounds like a heavenly spot for peacefulness!

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 3:03:00 AM

    Love it!