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Sceptesism

Open the door of opportunities;

Take a peek inside;

My door, though it has secrets, really has nothing to hide;

And though you may be sceptical;

Who are you to judge?

I mean really, look at yourself! I see a little pudge!

Take the chance and seek the thrill;

Or stay cooped up inside…..

But really, though you may see shadows, there is nothing here to hide.

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  1. Date: 1/2/2013 6:10:00 AM

    Welcome to the Soup, my friend! Jack

    Dwinnell Avatar Caitlin Dwinnell Date: 1/2/2013 1:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! It's great to have other poets appreciate my writing :)
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 1:50:00 PM

    nice. I like it - JH

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 12:04:00 PM

    Caitlin ah we all have our little secrets...David