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About This Poem

Done , is 2012


                  Done , is 2012


        A cloud that never showered 
        A seed deprived of sunshine
         A sea of dark unjust hands
         Ah!...Done.Deeds all done.

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  1. A Avatar
    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 1/27/2013 6:37:00 PM
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    wow... love this one again.... I hope this year I keep myself under the best clouds ad sunshine... no more depriving myself.... enjoyed...LINDA
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 1/8/2013 8:52:00 PM
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    Mehnaz, wow..wow... now this is a magic pen... and i love that it is finally over with... looking forward to closing this 2013 deal...lol...to early hu...love this poem..pd

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/9/2013 1:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda....
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/3/2013 6:23:00 PM
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    As for me, I had a lot of good memories from 2012. There were some dark moments that cast there shadow over the year, in particular the shooting of the Children in the USA, and the devastation in NewYork.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/8/2013 2:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes and Thank you Richard.... Life gives ups and downs....
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    harry horsman
    Date: 1/3/2013 2:08:00 PM
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    yes this powerful poem, packs a punch...

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/8/2013 2:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry, for stopping by.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/1/2013 10:03:00 AM
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    a dark one for the dastardly 2012. He had his moments though!!!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/8/2013 2:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea.
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    Richard Palmer
    Date: 1/1/2013 9:01:00 AM
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    all done,so lets all begin the new year with a positive mind and positive intentions,great write Mehnaz,check out my PRAYER 2013

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/8/2013 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You Richard for the 'Prayer'...
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    FRANK H.
    Date: 12/31/2012 10:49:00 PM
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    Great Write! So Much said with few words!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/8/2013 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Frank,
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    John Wulf
    Date: 12/31/2012 8:06:00 AM
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    Enjoyed this elegy on the departed year, especially line one.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/8/2013 2:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you John for liking this one.


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