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Tangled Webs

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Tangled Webs

Tangled webs, My soul hurts, I think I’d rather never have loved, than loved & lost instead, See, I’m depressed, I walk through Central Station giving pennies to the ‘Walking Dead’, I know that time flies, Like that toy plane we built up & let fly from the high rise, Mean guys are just the average, Prepared to savagely damage anything remotely romantic, I didn’t think I was one… You disagreed, The break up was a long one… I doubt that you’ll be missing me, Tangled Webs, My soul hurts, Sometimes I wish I’d never have loved, than loved & lost instead, Secrets & lies, I tried to stop the demise, of what began when I saw you cry, Now that’s all there seems to be, Raised voices or petty squabbles, just sitting in front of the TV, No drink or drug binging, Hanging out in clubs hinging, on drunk women Ambition & passion has been, Missing & lacking, But the vision of you packing up your bags is distracting, Tangled webs, My soul hurts, Mum’s wrong, I wish I’d never have loved than loved & lost instead, See, green grass grows & weeds die, You go from strength to strength; I’m straight from lie to lie, I try to cry, Can’t execute the liquid from my ducts I think I’m dead inside, Our wires criss-crossed, People look and say his loss, but this was, A Tangled web with only one fly that gets caught, So swallow me up & immerse me in guilt, It’s worse to have lost love ‘cos you know how heartbreak felt...

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  1. Date: 1/4/2013 11:31:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup! Hope you'll have great pleasure in sharing your thoughts and poems with us. - You write very well, and I look forward to reading more from you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Scott Avatar Craig Scott
    Date: 1/13/2013 2:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much for your comment, look forward to sharing more and seeing some of your material also! Craig x
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 10:33:00 AM
    Welcome to soup, a fine write a grief often felt and long remembered. Light & Love

    Scott Avatar Craig Scott
    Date: 1/13/2013 2:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your comment Debbie, hope you are well. Craig
  1. Date: 12/31/2012 3:05:00 PM
    Craig excellent write...David

    Scott Avatar Craig Scott
    Date: 1/13/2013 2:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Cheers David, look forward to seeing some of your stuff on here. Craig
  1. Date: 12/31/2012 7:06:00 AM
    Wow, this is such a powerful poem. I love the way you organized your words and the subtle rhymes throughout. It's rare that you come across such a real poem. Awesome job.

    Scott Avatar Craig Scott
    Date: 1/13/2013 2:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your kindness Heather, appreciate your attention to detail! Hope you like anything else I manage to get on here and shall check your page out soon! Craig
  1. Date: 12/30/2012 9:01:00 PM
    Awesome, I love it. You said and bare all. Hope your heart will heal with His help :)

    Scott Avatar Craig Scott
    Date: 1/13/2013 2:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for checking it out! Appreciate your time and compliment :)
  1. Date: 12/30/2012 6:47:00 PM
    Wow man, really amazing stuff. Love the content, the structure, etc. This has spine man, real spine & heart, but not in an emo wau :)...really brill-

    Scott Avatar Craig Scott
    Date: 1/13/2013 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Bianca, haha no Emo behaviour over here I assure you :) on the real though, appreciate your comment and will have a look at your material soon!