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Homesick - understepping

The sound of dripping rain caressing 
Damp scenery overjoyed the cling
The yearn brought me home to the old times
Blend yearn through under-stepping rhymes
Carry the sway along even hard
Smother the taste, touched sense deeper in

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  1. Date: 1/6/2013 7:34:00 AM

    I LUV THIS PIECE

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/6/2013 7:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Allan pleasured to see your comment :D, hug, yanny
  1. Date: 12/31/2012 3:03:00 PM

    Yanny I like this , you too are into this puzzle form...David

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/1/2013 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks David, I just tried to explore through these words :D glad that you like it :D