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New Year diet

At Christmas as always I ate
So much that I put on some weight
New year I must try
To stay off the pie
And next year, well I just can't wait.

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  1. Date: 1/18/2013 7:32:00 PM

    Lola,,,a belated congrats on a perfectomundo limerick...not a single thing could be improved upon! Limerick writing is def your strength!! Let's do this again real soon! ;) gwendolen

    barron Avatar lola barron Date: 1/19/2013 8:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks very much. Lola.
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 3:16:00 PM

    Perfect meter..the only one with it so far a BIG gold star to you! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

    barron Avatar lola barron Date: 1/18/2013 5:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks very much. Lola.
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 2:00:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your New Year's Resolution..Congratulatons on your win..Sara

    barron Avatar lola barron Date: 1/18/2013 3:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much.
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 11:27:00 PM

    this is a very nicely done limerick, great meter, rhyme and humor. Congrats, Iola.

    barron Avatar lola barron Date: 1/18/2013 2:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks very much.
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 10:39:00 AM

    Very good New Year Resolution by you here Lola.Congrats on your win in the contest.

    barron Avatar lola barron Date: 1/15/2013 1:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you.
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:39:00 AM

    Lola, ~ congratulations with the awesome win in Rix's "A Limerick in My Pocket Contest " contest.

    barron Avatar lola barron Date: 1/15/2013 1:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again for your comment. Lola.
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 7:39:00 AM

    Congratulations Lola xx

    barron Avatar lola barron Date: 1/15/2013 1:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. Lola.
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 5:50:00 AM

    nice one! congrats!

    barron Avatar lola barron Date: 1/15/2013 1:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks very much.
  1. Date: 12/31/2012 3:00:00 PM

    Lola I second that...David

    barron Avatar lola barron Date: 1/15/2013 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks very much. Lola.