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- - - I wish

I wish, I could go back in time Back, back to when I was a child Full of happiness and pure joy To Christmas with my family O, how I loved this special day I wish, I could go back in time The cooking and decorating Mom fussing and Grandma dusting Dad entwining lights on the tree And I, placing bright Christmas balls I wish, I could go back in time The fireplace crackling and glowing It is different now, for sure As my family left this world Sadly they took my Christmas joy I wish, I could go back in time Unrhymed Quatern December 30, 2012 For the contest, A Christmas Wish

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  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:50:00 AM

    This is sad and very touching. I feel for you. But as they say - lufe goes on. May God bless you always. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 12:27:00 PM

    enjoying this again, my friend - hope you are better soon x

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 6:08:00 PM

    I hear you..wishing you a Happy New Year and perhaps both of us can now put the holidays behind us until next year. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 2:08:00 PM

    Constance , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 1:22:00 PM

    love this touching write, my friend - I know exactly how you feel. my friend -forgive me for reading just one poem tonight - will read more tomorrow - so much catching up to do. Happy New Year to you - hope you are much better now. Congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 11:34:00 PM

    Wow, this is a masterful and wondrous write my friend! You have amazed me with this incredible and spectacular poem! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem this evening! I loved seeing such a well written piece as this one! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 3:45:00 PM

    One lovely wish, Constance. - I wish you a win for this poem. - HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! - // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 3:10:00 PM

    ‡ O' How Your Priceless Beauty Touches One's Heart With This Yearnfuls Loving Verse, Sweet Beautiful Constance ˜ Tis Why We Embrace This Lively Hope That Soothes Our Heart's And Leads Us Through As Beyound, The River's Banks Called Life ˜ In Faith We Choose An Intangibles Past, Or, An Everlastings Dream ? Wrap It Up And 'Love' I Will Hold ˜ You Are A Very Gifted As Beautiful Poetess ˜ 'Happy New Year.' My Love, Always, Rachel *