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Eloquent Dreaming

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Eloquent Dreaming

A journey of great expectation,
travel onward through the night.
My soul is free in this fantasy.
Feel the joy as you brace for the light.

A journey of sleep,I wait for it
to soothe my whimsical self.
In this fantasy my soul is free.
I put my troubles up on a shelf.

A journey into a sea of dreams,
the perfect peace now abides.
My soul is free in this fantasy.
I simply just float out with the tides.

A journey I'll try to remember,
a colorful picture show.
In this fantasy my soul is free.
My spirit's renewed,this much I know.



written December 30th, 2012





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  1. Date: 1/15/2013 9:08:00 AM

    Deb, :-) Congratulations in Suzette's " ZaniLa Rhyme - an exiting new contest for the holidays... " contest. Take care... PD

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 1:41:00 PM

    Great winning work..Enjoyed reading ..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 6:50:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 5:19:00 PM

    Congratulations on your wonderful win, Deb! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 1:47:00 PM

    Dreaming with you Deb, congrats in Su's contest

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:21:00 PM

    Congratulations Debbie. A great poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:38:00 AM

    DEB, very nice~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:00:00 AM

    I seem to be addicted to dreaming these days, if there is such an addiction. For dreams have become an escape. Enjoyed your poem and congrats on the win !!

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 10:18:00 AM

    Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 7:50:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Deb luv xx

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 5:25:00 AM

    I would have preferred a stronger rhyming scheme for the third line, c1;c2 (as per the examples). This is the "signature" of ZaniLa Rhyme. I loved the line: "I put my troubles up on a shelf." Only in dreams some can escape. Congratulations on your win, Deb. Best wishes, Suzette