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About This Poem

Our World


Our world is one spirit
When we die, our spirit will live on
In the clouds and heavens.
To watch and guide us, protect us.
Ancestors fought for what was rightfully theirs.
We face upheavals, in life we face death
We may become extinct, but our spirits live on!
We are one world.

© 3/9/2012

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    SKAT Aces-
    Date: 2/22/2013 5:58:00 PM
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    love your verse,~SKAT
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 1/15/2013 8:56:00 AM
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    Hi David, , :-) Congratulations in Debbie's fine " EIGHT Lines any KIND " contest. enjoy your day... TEX
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 1/14/2013 2:00:00 AM
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    you are so right Davidoff...congrads on a super HM.
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 1/13/2013 2:27:00 PM
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    Nice write David, thank you. Congrad's Light & Love
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    Anne Currin
    Date: 1/13/2013 11:07:00 AM
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    I couldn't agree with you more! Our spirits do live on :) congrats, David. This is splendid indeed
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/13/2013 9:34:00 AM
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    Congratulations David. Very well said.
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/13/2013 4:27:00 AM
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    Congrats on your HM David xx
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    Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/12/2013 8:29:00 PM
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    Deep words David .....Seren
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    Berinde Ovidiu-Claudiu
    Date: 1/7/2013 2:47:00 AM
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    Inspirational and meditative .
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    Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 1/5/2013 11:32:00 AM
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    I like this very much. I believe the sams thing. Our spirits will live forever. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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    Carma Reed
    Date: 1/5/2013 11:21:00 AM
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    One mind,one soul, one world together we shall stand as one....great spiritual write David love it immensely....
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 1/3/2013 3:09:00 AM
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    Such a unifying spirit in your poem. lovely and uplifting work David. thanks for sharing.
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    Heather Ober
    Date: 1/2/2013 8:07:00 AM
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    I absolutely love the optimism and faith in this poem. Reading this made my morning :)
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    Carl Fraser
    Date: 1/2/2013 7:36:00 AM
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    Very well penned David, this world is our proving ground for the spirit world we enter after, its why the lord says to "walk by the spirit".blessings and Happy New Year,Carl
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    Annalise Brigham
    Date: 1/1/2013 8:35:00 PM
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    Yes, we, everything is connected, I also believe, David. Too bad that some don't see this. Happy New Year! Always, Annalise
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    HOLLY MOORE
    Date: 1/1/2013 7:33:00 PM
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    I love the whole concept of that poem. It has a good vibe to it..Thanks for always reading my work..Hugs, Holly
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    Clay Ward
    Date: 1/1/2013 2:11:00 PM
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    Pretty awesome little write, enjoyed
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/1/2013 12:54:00 PM
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    And the world will go one we are the cycle that keeps the world turning David, like it xx
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    jack horne
    Date: 1/1/2013 12:44:00 PM
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    lovely write, my friend. Thanks very much - loved your contest – sorry I’ve been away from Soup for so long (my wife recently left me for someone else). Congrats on all your wins : )
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    Angel Simon
    Date: 1/1/2013 12:06:00 PM
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    HAPPY NEW YEAR David. Love the immortally mortal motif of this poem... Love... Angel
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 1/1/2013 8:53:00 AM
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    I feel the same way, that our spirit lives on, though I believe it is in what we have done: children, teaching, listening. The more I share with others, the more I will "live on".
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/1/2013 6:23:00 AM
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    Very nice poem David, and well written. - 2013 is here! - May it be a good year!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Ahsan Khalid
    Date: 1/1/2013 4:50:00 AM
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    i can see the dept of the words into it keep it up
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    Vesna Kovrlija
    Date: 1/1/2013 1:21:00 AM
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    So interesting and original thoughts! I wish you a very happy New Year!
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 1/1/2013 12:44:00 AM
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    Now I know who my true friends are... thank you David, like I said never will i take your friendship for granted again...but i am not like the other poets... still thank you for everything and the win... sweet 2013... xox~ mighty Tex...

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    you truly are a good man... xox~ PD
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 12/31/2012 6:24:00 PM
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    One world, yes, global citizens.. wonderful concept! David please have a safe and Happy New Year. Light & Love
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    Joe Maverick
    Date: 12/31/2012 5:04:00 PM
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    Quite an interesting look on things David, good and readable piece.."
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    POETESS DARKLY
    Date: 12/31/2012 3:16:00 PM
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    lovely dave great imagery and flow
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    DON JOHNSON
    Date: 12/31/2012 2:29:00 PM
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    Good one Dave, happy new year is here, it will catch up with you soon :)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/31/2012 2:17:00 PM
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    Our spirits are extinct, and yet alive. that is a cool thought, David!!! Good one.
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