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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 5:58:00 PM
    love your verse,~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:56:00 AM
    Hi David, , :-) Congratulations in Debbie's fine " EIGHT Lines any KIND " contest. enjoy your day... TEX

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:27:00 PM
    Nice write David, thank you. Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 11:07:00 AM
    I couldn't agree with you more! Our spirits do live on :) congrats, David. This is splendid indeed

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 9:34:00 AM
    Congratulations David. Very well said.

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 4:27:00 AM
    Congrats on your HM David xx

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 8:29:00 PM
    Deep words David .....Seren

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 2:47:00 AM
    Inspirational and meditative .

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 11:32:00 AM
    I like this very much. I believe the sams thing. Our spirits will live forever. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 11:21:00 AM
    One mind,one soul, one world together we shall stand as one....great spiritual write David love it immensely....

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 3:09:00 AM
    Such a unifying spirit in your poem. lovely and uplifting work David. thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 8:07:00 AM
    I absolutely love the optimism and faith in this poem. Reading this made my morning :)

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 7:36:00 AM
    Very well penned David, this world is our proving ground for the spirit world we enter after, its why the lord says to "walk by the spirit".blessings and Happy New Year,Carl

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 8:35:00 PM
    Yes, we, everything is connected, I also believe, David. Too bad that some don't see this. Happy New Year! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 7:33:00 PM
    I love the whole concept of that poem. It has a good vibe to it..Thanks for always reading my work..Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 2:11:00 PM
    Pretty awesome little write, enjoyed

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:54:00 PM
    And the world will go one we are the cycle that keeps the world turning David, like it xx

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:44:00 PM
    lovely write, my friend. Thanks very much - loved your contest – sorry I’ve been away from Soup for so long (my wife recently left me for someone else). Congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:06:00 PM
    HAPPY NEW YEAR David. Love the immortally mortal motif of this poem... Love... Angel

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 8:53:00 AM
    I feel the same way, that our spirit lives on, though I believe it is in what we have done: children, teaching, listening. The more I share with others, the more I will "live on".