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Cold Pillow

I turned and find the pillow now so cold
You are not there now for me to hold
Was it only through night’s dark hours?
Is sleep so cruel to wield such powers?

To take you from me though you were not there
Dreams so cruel not to answer my sweet prayer
You felt so real and you held me so tight
My special dream lover through the dark night

Entwined together as one, not parted
Not a thread between love uncharted
To sail the hours on waves rising high
Hearts in rhythm souls touching and sigh

To turn and find that you were not there 
Left me bereft incomplete not one of a pair. 
© ~GG~ 30/12/2012


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  1. Date: 12/31/2012 3:03:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your passionate dream ..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 9:56:00 PM

    Great poem, Mandy. Can feel the void you are describing. Awesome! Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 12:13:00 PM

    Words that are uttered loud and clear So succint in message but low on cheer, echoes now what may lie,for you in the coming year.xx Hugs

    Mayy  Avatar Robert Mayy Date: 12/30/2012 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    succinct
  1. Date: 12/30/2012 11:26:00 AM

    Mandy I love sonnets and this one is great,..David

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 10:31:00 AM

    The cold pillow is no substitute for that lovely dream. But dreams can come true. Wishing you a wonderful new year.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/30/2012 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jon and all the best to to you and yours xx
  1. Date: 12/30/2012 8:46:00 AM

    the sonnet is the purist of love poems, and the heart that wrote this is the purist of poets...again Mandy "Golden Girl" you are so special....Happy New Year..

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/30/2012 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks harry you are so good to me xx