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Dream World Star

I desire to enter the light of the dream world Where everything has hope, so I may get the girl The stars all shine above Giving off a special love Nothing is as bright as the star that gives a twirl
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 12/31/2012 7:56:00 AM

    I am sure u will get the girl writin poetry like this!! lol....Hey Russell...been a blast reading thru your work this yr...a very special New Yrs Eve tonite with your family and friends...Happy New Yr 2014!! gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 10:14:00 PM

    excellent work Russell mate, imagination can procreate, and shines the brightest star:)

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 8:34:00 PM

    I believe we are both writing from some heaven tonight Russell, enjoyed your poem tonight, xxx

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 7:45:00 PM

    hello Russell, great Limerick you have penned here my friend. Rollo

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 6:35:00 PM

    gotta love that twirling star!! Sweet poem, Russell.