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Edge of a clearing

The rain pours on the outskirts Edge of a clearing That resides inside forest It shows a darkling Two people reside With umbrellas they walk there A place where they cried
Russell Sivey Form Seguidilla

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  1. Date: 12/31/2012 4:29:00 AM

    rain falls the tears a searing, washed away the rain of healing, bitterness in denial... happy new year Russell mate, from johnson south of the border gate, orright... 3 hours till 2013 here

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 12:54:00 PM

    Beautiful poem here Russell.Enjoyed.Happy New Year to you.

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 8:56:00 PM

    Droplets flow... from above and from within... wonderful... Terry

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 6:37:00 PM

    I like how the rain goes with the crying of the two people there. A good parallel.