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Beautiful Lies

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Beautiful Lies

Beautiful Lies

One beautiful lie , an unvoiced sonnet
Words veiled with a crime that steals my hearts last beat
Slow turn of your mood shows me disquiet
With kisses warm and vulgar with deceit.

One pulse stills, our love was not the one love,
Just remains of a lukewarm cup of tea.
You steep and brood, one pineing the lost dove.
My broken wing lame, I fall into the sea.

Beautiful lies, my heart begs for your fires
To hear the words forged my way by anvil
Beautiful lies, hope grows dim and expires
Waiting for judgment by divine gavel

Tremble my lips , tears fall dry from my eyes
Protect me from madness, beautiful lies.

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  1. Date: 5/15/2014 10:16:00 PM
    Beautiful.. :)

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 4:06:00 PM
    Those lies must have been as beautiful as this poem.

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 6:48:00 PM
    Beautiful! It follows the Shakesperean sonnet form that I love. This really touched me.

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 6:23:00 PM
    wow, now THIS is how to do a sonnet on beautiful lies. Awesome writing. This has got to score high!! (yours is a bit like mine in its theme!)

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 3:13:00 PM
    So good too good not to polish..soup mail honey bun. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 1:49:00 PM
    Brenda, thank you for your comments on my poem The simple things I miss, yes, after reading this piece of your work, I see that you do understand the difficulties of love in it's simplest form and pleasures. This poem of yours gave me pause for reflection, and moved me, great poem! x peace and love to you poet friend, Ruby