Your Moon and Stars - Revised by Annalise Brigham

Your Moon and Stars - Revised

In your words, I am your moon and stars I light your path in a lonely place Bright as the moon and my eyes are like stars Yet, you lie with another when I’m away I light your path in a lonely place The reflection of my face is all you see Yet you lie with another while I’m away I am food for your heart; I nourish your soul The reflection of my face is all you see Bright as the moon and my eyes are like stars I am food for your heart; I nourish your soul Mere words chosen precisely to beguile Bright as the moon and my eyes are like stars Words once held as truth, now accuse you Mere words chosen precisely to beguile All beautiful lies used in strategy Words once held as truth now accuse you Bright as the moon and my eyes are like stars All beautiful lies used in strategy In your words, I am your moon and stars ~*~


Joseph May Date: 1/21/2013 8:52:00 PM nicely penned Annalise...thanks for stopping by....soup mail
Juanita Thorn Date: 1/3/2013 8:53:00 PM I want to thankyou Annalise for your kind words to me...I've never posted a poem anywhere before, terrified of being ridiculed, so thankyou, you lifted my spirits! And I feel even better now after reading some of your work, your words and what you do with them are amazing. I hope to write like you someday.
Rachel St.Cross Date: 12/31/2012 5:59:00 AM ‡ Makes One Wonder Whom Your Precious Heart Could Be Speaking Of If At All ? Perhaps Your Beauty Is Using The Gift In Both Brush As Imagination To Speak For, Sweet Beautiful Annalise ˜ If The Latter Be True My First Thought Would Be Of, God, Speaking Unto Another ? Either Or I Like The Passion I Find Amid These Well Chosen Words ˜ They Reveal A Depthful Quality Amid Your Beauty's Strength And Character ˜ Quite Admirable ˜ Thanks For Your Sweet Visit ˜ 'Happy New Year.' My Love, Always, Rachel *
harry horsman Date: 12/30/2012 5:33:00 AM wonderful poetry, by a wonderful poet,, this is amazing
Mystic Rose Date: 12/29/2012 8:37:00 PM great poem you have penned Annalise, great for the beautiful lies contest, hope yo enter it, xxx
Timothy Jacks Date: 12/29/2012 6:59:00 PM Wow! Annalise a Powerful pulse of light you are. I knew as soon as I read your words you handed me those many days ago. I'm so happy you came by. In your words you are my moon and stars. Your an Amazing Person. seaa
Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/29/2012 6:50:00 PM IS this for the Beautiful Lies contest? I had forgotten if that one was still going on. This is really lovely. Pantoums are awesome!
David Williams Date: 12/29/2012 4:27:00 PM Annalise great pantoum, have a very happy peaceful New Year...David

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