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I Wonder

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I Wonder

I Wonder
As the rain continues to fall I think of you
I wonder what I am going to do 
As the lightning rents the sky in two
I wonder what I am going to do

As lips part and taste the essence of you 
I wonder what I am going to do 
As the pillows weep when you are gone
I wonder how I will carry on.

©  29/12/2012~GG~

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  1. Date: 12/29/2012 8:53:00 PM

    So much passion in these few sentences, your heart is made of gold, wrap your arms around yourself, and say "I Love You" Now doesn't that feel good, You will be fine, xxx

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/30/2012 11:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That feels good , be good to yourself love and all the best xx
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 5:51:00 PM

    Wow, beautifully written. So much emotions are felt when reading your penned words. Best Wishes, Connie

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/30/2012 11:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awh bless you Connie love , Happy New Year To you and yours xx
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 2:55:00 PM

    This is lovely Mandy,, hang in there Girl,, wonderful poetry like this will help you carry on..who knows whats round the corner...

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/30/2012 11:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Will keep my eye open harry xx
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 2:52:00 PM

    I know this feeling well Mandy, somehow we find a way, happy new year, Carl

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/30/2012 11:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Carl and a Happy New Year to you too xx
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 2:39:00 PM

    Mandy super, brill, great and any other superlative you can think of, if we don't speak before hand have a very peaceful New Year...David

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/30/2012 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You too my friend xx