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The Breakup Understepping Six

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The Breakup Understepping Six

When I see you my heart skips a beat
Because I know I've stolen your heart
Now I See we are not meant to be
I hope that you will smile once again
When you start to cry my own tears fall
You truly are the one I wanted
I can't explain why I feel confused
Things were not meant to go oh so wrong
I did not wish to make you this sad

See understepping One to see how to find the hidden line.
I invite others to try this new form.



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  1. Date: 1/2/2013 9:58:00 AM
    I have been dealing with exactly what you have written here Richard, this was hard for me to read but it helps to know im not alone, blessings my friend, Carl, there is a song by Bonnie Raitt i think its called I cant make you love me if you wont.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/2/2013 3:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Very true! Thanks for commenting, I hope you come to a resolution my friend.
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 9:56:00 AM
    I have been dealing with exactly what you have written here Richard, this was hard for me to read but it helps to know im not alone, blessings my friend, Carl

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:59:00 PM
    Hello Richard, , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for everything..pd

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 9:32:00 AM
    Above..what is the new form called? Perhaps label on the bottom?[Re:Straw Men..I always encourage discourse ;) I too believe in God but not in the dominion of man, not in original sin. I also think though some men appear to have a brain, many many more [I speak of men & woman both here] appear not to?And for me God is all both darkness & light, all actions must take place YET we may choice the side we act on...Light & Love

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/30/2012 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Debbie, I call it Understepping. I appreciate your response. There is a story about Einstein and a proffesor and Einstein that deals with the subject of Darkness and light and good and evil. I think you would find it very intresting. Even if Your writing pushed some emotional buttons I still appreciate your skill and passion.
  1. Date: 12/30/2012 3:54:00 AM
    Richard I did something on the lines of this many moons ago, I like puzzles in writing...David

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/30/2012 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Do you remember the name of your poem? I would like to read it.