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About This Poem

haiku 29

an open portal
the moon lies in a pink sky --
snores sound

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  1. Grisetti Avatar
    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 1/1/2013 8:51:00 AM
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    I am really enjoying these poems from your recent trip. Must have been very inspirational.
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    kash poet
    Date: 12/30/2012 12:58:00 PM
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    Hey Very nice!Happy New Year!!
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    kathryn collins
    Date: 12/30/2012 12:22:00 PM
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    do they echo.... those snores?
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    Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 12/30/2012 5:31:00 AM
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    ow how loove your haiku dear Ma.Happy New Year with big hugs...ku hai :).Thanks for all your help re haiku.. X x
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    harry horsman
    Date: 12/30/2012 2:09:00 AM
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    not only visual, but sound, Happy New Year, Debbie, like this
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    Rick Parise
    Date: 12/29/2012 5:10:00 PM
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    I see the imagery!!!NICE!!~ Gezzzzzzzz I guess I need to pay attention......Typing away in dream land!!!!U Have soupmail!!!Thank you-
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    Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/29/2012 9:12:00 AM
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    Missed your poems.... Nice haiku. Funny too. Love, Mehnaz.
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    CYNDI MACMILLAN
    Date: 12/29/2012 6:24:00 AM
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    SHeesh! Tried to comment to blogs, to send a mail to Soup and kept getting that freaking 500 message! Hope soup fixes it soon. okay, will try again to comment on your blog.. it worked HERE.. there???
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    CYNDI MACMILLAN
    Date: 12/29/2012 6:23:00 AM
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    Trying to comment. Does this work?
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    Vassilis Comporozos
    Date: 12/29/2012 1:49:00 AM
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    It's a real haiku, for many haikus posted on the Net are not haikus...
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    Rollo West
    Date: 12/28/2012 9:23:00 PM
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    Hi Debbie, gotta love this one. Rollo
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    James Marshall Goff
    Date: 12/28/2012 7:58:00 PM
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    Honestly Deb, I don't believe a reiki master snores! Who's the lucky chap? jimbo
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/28/2012 4:56:00 PM
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    This one is funny, Debs. it sounds romantic and then that awful snoring sound!!
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 12/28/2012 4:44:00 PM
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    Welcome back Debbie, I miss you and your lovely poems, I hope your Christmas was a good one, and I hope the New Year will be filled with peace love and joy for you, Happy New Year xxxx
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/28/2012 3:48:00 PM
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    You're back and with a good one , welcome back xx
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 12/28/2012 3:44:00 PM
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    lovely haiku xoxo pd


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