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Understepping Five

Are all your days meant to be the same?
Will you choose to live a boring life?
Don't be afraid you should take a chance.
if you want to, you should start today
Many people will only try once.
You know when there is something worthwhile.
When you try the old is new again.


To find the hidden message refer to my poem "Understepping One"
The directions are on the bottom.

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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 8:29:00 AM

    Wonderful message to loved one. Thanks for reading my write and for your comment. Loved always, bl

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/1/2013 9:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks bl, what does bl stand for?
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 11:35:00 AM

    Love the hidden message. I need to try this form too!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/29/2012 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne, I would be honored if you try one.
  1. Date: 12/28/2012 5:06:00 PM

    Richard is this another new form you will be trying to get installed here? Suzette was at her blog today asking how we would like poetry contests that use a code. You should let her in on this one.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/28/2012 6:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, I have submitted. I will drop Suzette a line.
  1. Date: 12/28/2012 5:05:00 PM

    Got it!!! and the answer is: it depends!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/28/2012 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    "Are you afraid to try something new" is the understepped line. 1st word 1st line second word 2nd line, 3rd word third line, 4th word 4th line, 5th word 5th line, 6th word 6th line and 7th word 7th line. string them all together and you have the understepped line. All lines must be 9 sylables including understepped line.
  1. Date: 12/28/2012 5:03:00 PM

    a riddle, hmmm? I am not good with riddles, but I enjoyed reading this one, Richard!

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 4:08:00 PM

    very creative xoxo pd

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/28/2012 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda
  1. Date: 12/28/2012 9:56:00 AM

    soup mail

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/28/2012 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    on my way
  1. Date: 12/28/2012 9:41:00 AM

    Good one Rick, hey can you check my first one again? I re-wrote it.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/28/2012 9:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Okunsebor. Did you find the hidden message??
  1. Date: 12/28/2012 8:30:00 AM

    Nice one.. Trying makes things that seem old new

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/28/2012 7:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for visiting, nice to see a new face. Except I cant fully see it *lol* mysterious picture you got there. Keep em guessing. Appreciate the comment.