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The problem with alcohol ~~~~ is the alcohol! © 26/12/2012
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Caleb Smith
Date: 2/18/2013 11:29:00 AM
Yessir...that would be the problem...haha
Terry O'Leary
Date: 1/14/2013 7:20:00 AM
Another problem is that there often is not enough... Terry
John Posey
Date: 1/9/2013 4:38:00 AM
Clever, and oh so true..... Jake
SKAT Aces-
Date: 1/2/2013 1:46:00 PM
no where near a drinker*LUV~SKAT
daver austin
Date: 1/2/2013 8:58:00 AM
I know. I've been there - a regular fish, now happily reformed. Love, daver
HOLLY MOORE
Date: 1/1/2013 7:31:00 PM
Isn't that the truth! I have a lot to say about that subject...great monoku...Hugs, Holly
bl devnath
Date: 1/1/2013 8:38:00 AM
Wonderful thought my friend. But it helps to boost up mind. For bad man it's very bad and very good for good man. Good qualities are seen in good man and bad qualities are seen in bad man, it's practical. Thanks for your comment, my friend. Loved always, bl
Nurudeen Olaniran
Date: 1/1/2013 7:37:00 AM
IT'S TRUE WORDS. THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT ON MY PIECE:TCB. LUV FROM NURUDEEN
Joann Grisetti
Date: 12/31/2012 5:21:00 PM
Alcohol is also a solution. Thanks for your comments on my poems. Happy New Year.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/31/2012 2:15:00 PM
hey, that is short but VERY good.
odeline chigwedere
Date: 12/31/2012 1:10:00 PM
Dear David.thank you for you comment on my poem.i am in stitches after read "the problem with alcohol"you are the best.Odeline
Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/31/2012 12:45:00 PM
Got that one correct..Enjoyed your Monoku..Sara
Gwendolen R.
Date: 12/31/2012 7:34:00 AM
U hit a HOME RUN, MUCKER! The problem with New Yrs Day is the origin of this monoku too..hahah...We just play games, eat great food, listen to great music, and play more games...good ole fashioned fun! U and your wife are welcome to fly over here any time! Happy New Yr...it can only get better, right!? :) gwendolen
apoorva patrikar
Date: 12/31/2012 6:30:00 AM
haha! great one!!! on soup after a long long time, happy new year!
Tim Ryerson
Date: 12/30/2012 7:22:00 PM
Can't put it any better than that David...'for external use only!' - Tim
James Marshall Goff
Date: 12/30/2012 2:05:00 PM
David, Pop's last words to my daughter, before her college journey, he waved her close and rasped "no drinking"....bustin' her chops in last stage lymphoma! .....bought as good asto it gets!...jimbo
kash poet
Date: 12/30/2012 12:33:00 PM
Yes,That's really a problem!Happy New Year to you David.
Angel Simon
Date: 12/30/2012 12:20:00 PM
HAPPY NEW YEAR
Angel Simon
Date: 12/30/2012 12:14:00 PM
Precise David... the problem with the problem is the problem... Alcohol... Love... Angel
SCRIBE ML
Date: 12/30/2012 11:02:00 AM
Straight to the point and truthful...clever as always poet!
Toquyen Harrell
Date: 12/30/2012 8:13:00 AM
You got that right, David :) Enjoyed. Have a great New Year!
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 12/30/2012 7:51:00 AM
We speak a lot about how dangerous smoking is (and it is dangerous) ... But no one talks about how harmful it is with alcohol ..... HAPPY NEW YEAR!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/30/2012 6:01:00 AM
Yes David...and alcahol + alcahol=the problem
Mystic Rose
Date: 12/29/2012 7:12:00 PM
I see, so spiking my eggnog was a no no, too late, got a little craaaazzzzzyyyyyy Happy New Year David, xxxx
Rollo West
Date: 12/29/2012 4:33:00 PM
hello David, short, but tells a lot. Rollo
jeffry cohan
Date: 12/29/2012 11:53:00 AM
thanks for reading my vodka at three a.m. poem.....i dig your way of thinking, super creatively.... however, as i wrote you, i must disagree---the problem with alcohol is the god forsaken hangover the next day.....your brother in solidarity PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/28/2012 4:16:00 PM
says you xoxo pd
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/28/2012 3:26:00 PM
Hello David, lol... right to the point... ... always~ TEX 100% proof
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 12/28/2012 3:26:00 PM
Home no will write more as soon as I feel better ;) L & L [your post should arrive by the end of Jan. LOL]
Russell Sivey
Date: 12/28/2012 2:27:00 PM
Ha ha, lol, yes this is very true my friend! That would be the problem! This is an awesome little monoku David, I enjoyed reading this incredible piece, Great Work!!
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