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Forever sure

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Forever sure

Forever more...
is how I answered her

She asked me how long
I would love her for
forever more
no less no more
I swore

No high wall or strong door
I'm sure
and my word I gave
she my love
and my soul her slave
Forever sure

Written by my son 2012






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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 4:55:00 AM
    awesome poem

    Peranteau Avatar JoanMarie Peranteau
    Date: 1/1/2013 5:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ahsan, My son & I thank you for viewing his write and for your kind & expressive comment. Thank you, JoanMarie & Son.
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 6:29:00 AM
    Your son is a very talented and creative poet my dear friend! Awesome! Best wishes for 2013!

    Peranteau Avatar JoanMarie Peranteau
    Date: 12/29/2012 8:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I agree, that is why I had to post it. He read the comments also and he thanks you and appreciates your comment and appreciation.
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 1:46:00 AM
    Whoa! It is a beautiful poem! The idea of forever and nothing else - now that is an all encompassing love described. Well done for him!

    Peranteau Avatar JoanMarie Peranteau
    Date: 12/29/2012 8:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    On behalf of my son & myself we say thank you for your comment and we are so glad that the poem conveyed the feeling he was trying to express and that you were able to tap into it. Thank you JoanMarie & Gary.
  1. Date: 12/28/2012 6:06:00 PM
    It's a nice sentiment Written on the form of poetic images Thank you, dear and your son

    Peranteau Avatar JoanMarie Peranteau
    Date: 12/29/2012 9:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh my dear friend, on behalf of my son & myself we thank you for your comment, well said. We are so glad that you got the sense of his poem. Thank you, JoanMarie & my son Gary.
  1. Date: 12/28/2012 4:25:00 PM
    thanks for sharing awesome poem xoxo pd

    Peranteau Avatar JoanMarie Peranteau
    Date: 12/29/2012 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your very welcome. We are both appreciative that you took the time to read and comment on it. Thank you JoanMarie and My Son.
  1. Date: 12/28/2012 11:19:00 AM
    A great talent for the future, very well written! Wishing you and your family a happy new year 2013! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Peranteau Avatar JoanMarie Peranteau
    Date: 12/29/2012 9:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    We thankyou...I think so too... JoanMarie and My Son