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Understepping Poem Four

I choose the path on which I travel.
I am facing the world without fear.
Hope is in understanding the words
The exceeding love colored with grace
Splendored the time with marvelous verse
Half life written on poetry path
Awakening precious World of Soup


To understand how this form works and to 
find the hidden line read explanation in
my "Understepping Poem Two".

This poem was written in Collaboration with my friend Yanny.
Also check out her poem of the same name once you decipher
the imbedded message.

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  1. Date: 12/31/2012 8:08:00 PM

    And I am too!! (replying to your hidden message) These are great fun. Happy New Year to you.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/31/2012 8:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Would this be a love Triangle??? lol
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 11:37:00 AM

    Awesome!!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/31/2012 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne!
  1. Date: 12/28/2012 4:26:00 PM

    great collaboration xoxo pd

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/28/2012 7:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 12/28/2012 5:15:00 AM

    Hi, nice collaboration here! I have tried your new form... I just posted it. It's fun!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/28/2012 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good morning Rebecca, I enjoyed your poem.