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I am In Love With Poetry Soup - Understepping

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I am In Love With Poetry Soup - Understepping

I crack my shield and face the true world
I am butterfly from a cocoon
Free fly in, heed the noises above
The wondrous keen love colored the grace
Splendor the time, marvelous with words
Half life written bare on poetry
Wandered self in world of juicy soup


Inspired by Richard Lamoureux format poem
"Understepping style"

Note:
9 syllables each line
Read first word first line
Second word second line
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  1. Date: 12/30/2012 3:42:00 PM

    Very,very well done my friend Yanny!! HAPPY NEW YEAR !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 11:20:00 AM

    Happy New Year Yanny!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/29/2012 4:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Happy New Year Richard :D
  1. Date: 12/28/2012 3:10:00 PM

    I like it... I read some of Richards... wish i had time to think of one... love this style...pd

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 10:11:00 PM

    nice style. liked it.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/27/2012 10:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Bidyut, i like it to :D
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 7:34:00 PM

    Rick told me to check yours out, you did a GREAT job! I am in love with the soup too :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/27/2012 7:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne, this format really tempting to be tried :D
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 6:09:00 PM

    Hi Yanny see my response to your comment on my Understepping Two poem.

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 5:59:00 PM

    Way to go Yanny! Excellent... you are my first successful student of "Understepping"

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/27/2012 6:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yeaaayyyy!!! :D
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 1:58:00 PM

    Soup Mail

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 10:44:00 AM

    Hi Yanny, I am honored you gave it a try. I call it "Understepping". Soup Mail

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 10:33:00 AM

    Well I can see you succeeded Yanny love xx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/27/2012 10:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mandy :D